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Forum Index > News and Announcements > Nytekrie Revamp Sketches
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Duckymomo
Level 70
Majestic Brewmistress
Joined: 4/24/2018
Threads: 17
Posts: 356
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:54 AM Post #21
Yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!
Lunalamoone
Level 69
Majestic Sculptor
Joined: 3/17/2018
Threads: 59
Posts: 430
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:57 AM Post #22
can't see the design sketches on a school chromebook...
Ayalaatreides
Level 64
Joined: 11/7/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 47
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:57 AM Post #23
Loving the amount of detail on their feathers!!! My one critique is that I feel like the male's pose is more static in this sketch than the current pose. It looks a little less lively, in my opinion. If the pose had a little more movement in it, I think it would be perfect.
Ethan78790
Level 44
Joined: 8/26/2019
Threads: 15
Posts: 280
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM Post #24
Maybe make the head slightly bigger maybe?
Aerimistress
Level 70
Trickster
Joined: 10/12/2018
Threads: 36
Posts: 1,632
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM Post #25
Oh my goodness, I am in love! I mean, I loved them before, but I love them even more now. *screams* I really can't wait until this happens. *happy dance*
Kalores
Level 70
Premier Sculptor
Joined: 8/11/2013
Threads: 95
Posts: 3,097
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM Post #26
Okay, I am super happy with the concept so far! I'm really looking forward to seeing how they get developed from here! :D
Skyawesomeness
Level 64
Joined: 10/1/2017
Threads: 27
Posts: 396
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 11:59 AM Post #27
Those are adorable! Almost makes me actually like the species (nothing against the design Im just not a fan of the breed itself)
Cyradis4
Level 70
High Warlord
Joined: 4/26/2015
Threads: 51
Posts: 373
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:04 PM Post #28
OMG so cute! Love the babies and the female.

I have to agree with the others on the male, though. He's not quite right. I'm not good with crits, but I'll try to say what looks weird to me:

- The chest is really weak, weaker than the girls. The wing-arms attach there and across the back, shouldn't it be pretty deep and muscly for flying?
- The tail seems to be as thick as the body. That may be because of the thin chest, I don't know...
- Tail feathers are getting lost in the head feathers. Coloring will help, but I think a tail position shift fixes the problem?

Hope this helps!
C4.
Savynn
Level 70
Premier Sculptor
Joined: 12/18/2012
Threads: 159
Posts: 3,819
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:06 PM Post #29
I'm so happy that these really still contain their essence! I've always loved that they look part owl and part dino raptor. The hatchlings are adorable!

Edit: I see what the above post means when talking about the lack of chest for the male and also the position of the tail feathers. He could use a bit of tinkering.
Edited By Savynn on 9/10/2019 at 12:08 PM.
Zalea
Level 62
Joined: 4/8/2019
Threads: 13
Posts: 125
Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:11 PM Post #30
Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=80691&page=3#28
Author: Cyradis4
Time Posted: 9/10/2019 at 12:04 PM
OMG so cute! Love the babies and the female.

I have to agree with the others on the male, though. He's not quite right. I'm not good with crits, but I'll try to say what looks weird to me:

- The chest is really weak, weaker than the girls. The wing-arms attach there and across the back, shouldn't it be pretty deep and muscly for flying?
- The tail seems to be as thick as the body. That may be because of the thin chest, I don't know...
- Tail feathers are getting lost in the head feathers. Coloring will help, but I think a tail position shift fixes the problem?

Hope this helps!
C4.


I agree with what's been said here ^^ Other than that: They are so adorable!!! ToT *w* <3 I can't wait to see the final design!
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