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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:18 AM
Hello everyone! Faelora is next on the list to be revamped and we have some brand new sketches to get some feedback on! As always, please be constructive and nice with comments directed towards us or other players! Thank you! :)
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:20 AM
ooohh they look so elegant!
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:23 AM
I'm liking what I see so far. Looks like a white tail deer and a flower bush had a baby to me.
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:29 AM
I feel like right off the bat, the males back is sort of... not straight or leveled correctly. The females behind seems a tad too small aswell and shes a little short. Opposite for the male hatchling where the legs infront seem a little too small compared to the back
The males chest seems to.... bulge, for lack of a better term in a sort of weird uncomfortable looking way, maybe adding some fur tuffs to the bottom of the chest would help take away from the smooth look? Or maybe/aswell as floofing up the leaf crest around his neck to sort of equal the females layered leaf look. This might have been glossed over, but i will mention the male doesnt have any extra leaf-age on his legs,, only his horns, unlike the hatchling.
I really love the males horns though! On the hatchling they seem a little too... pointy for a baby but,,
Something that sort of irks me is that neither of them are really looking at the player-- and there are some species who dont do this but it looks pretty strange on atleast the female.
But overall, very excited to see how this revamp turns out ^^;
Edited By Sv3ntity on 8/11/2021 at 2:30 AM.
Collector of Souls
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:30 AM
All right! Same animal with improved art! Just what was wanted.
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:35 AM
They sketches look really lovely! The male's chest does seem to curve out a little bit far - making it fluffy or a little smaller curve might help.~
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:37 AM
Ooooh very nice deer tho I do agree that the size difference between the male and female hatchlings is very odd. Also the male adult could use a lil more flower around the neck imo.
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:47 AM
I kind of like the puffed out chest, makes me think of the "Great Prince of the Forest" from Bambi.
The Sweet Tooth
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 3:58 AM
Ah, one of my coveted species!
So far I am liking the adult male, his face and horns are amazing! He seems so stoic! However, I do feel there is something odd going on between his chest area and body. That maybe the head and neck are a bit forward and up from his body. I see this with the female adult and the baby male as well.
The baby males body seems a bit larger, like it's a bit closer/forward from his head and neck and his face seems a bit small.
The baby girl is adorable. Her front legs have some odd bulging going on though.
So other than a few body proportion issues, I think these are looking great!
Posted: 8/11/2021 at 4:18 AM
oh wow i love them :o
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