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Forum Index > News and Announcements > Faelora Revamp Sketches
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Quailking
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 11:57 AM Post #31
My problems with this are the chest and body height i guesss especially on male. chest seems to end to early and the body looks to small compared to head and neck not legthwise but in depth(width? whatever). looks liknda like a centaur woth a deers body then a too large deers head.
Dinnerbone
Level 70
The Artistic
Joined: 1/21/2016
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 12:27 PM Post #32
my edits!



(pls tell me it works lol)
keep in mind i know almost nothing about deer, this is purely from an artistic lens!
Edited By Dinnerbone on 8/11/2021 at 3:35 PM.
Jetstar
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Joined: 3/17/2018
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 12:46 PM Post #33
yessss I have been waiting for faeloras to be revamped for a while and I absolutely LOVE the sketches!
Quailking
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 12:58 PM Post #34
That looks amazing, love your changes
Fox
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Joined: 3/10/2014
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 1:20 PM Post #35
They look really nice. I'm glad to see the essence of them is the exact same, just better artwork.
Itgoeslikethis
Level 64
The Artistic
Joined: 4/23/2021
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:30 PM Post #36
The males chest seems a little to big, maybe if it looked a little less muscular
Ximph
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 2:52 PM Post #37
Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=99281&page=2#14
Author: Scathreoite
Time Posted: 8/11/2021 at 5:32 AM
Adult Male:
> antlers don't look like they're at the same angle (closer antler looks like it's more backwards-angled, far antler looks like it's sticking more out to the side)
> Chest looks. Very strange. With the Huuuge bulge that goes in and then goes down and then goes into the legs (the bulgy chest could work, but I think it'd need to come down more to not have the weird bit between it and the legs)
> his body seems pretty thin- most stags are pretty blocky

>adult female's neck seems too long
> front legs seem too far back related to neck
> her back is VERY dipped, and the shoulder area is extremely high
> one of her ear flower's petals is literally sticking straight down her ear canal that CANNOT be comfortable.
> her legs are very splayed and her furthest leg seems to be on a slightly different plane to the others

> baby male's torso and shoulder joints are a bit off-looking,

> baby female's neck should be connecting higher than it is

Me, doing some sketches over the top:

Deer legs continue to make me cry, they're awful, and my attempts at them are ALSO awful, and also I was extremely halfassing the plants because they are basically fine outside the female's ear flower (I'd basically 100% given up at adding them by the time I reached the baby female.
(these aren't great sketches but hey)


I wanted to note that I like the way the female baby has a more 'pert' nose in Scath's sketches, I think that would really make the female look cuter. The body proportions was the biggest problem. I think maybe the male baby head needs to be...I dunno, rounder? More 'cute' for his baby self. Though I still like the Adult Male head looking somewhat away from us as it makes him seem more regal and proud. Like the great prince of the forest. :D
Fennimage666
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Posted: 8/11/2021 at 4:46 PM Post #38
Might just be me, but aesthetically I like the first version of the male baby better, but I would suggest making it's back half smaller, instead of the front half bigger, to fix the proportions being wonky while also preserving the agile look. The new version just looks bulky and wonky to me.

Other than that, the changes look amazing!
Edited By Fennimage666 on 8/11/2021 at 4:48 PM.
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