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Limor
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Posted: 8/25/2019 at 9:30 PM
Post #781
== Critique ==
So with your design it gets somewhat muddled, which may in part be due to traits as puffs get very muddled very quickly, but currently I think your design could use some more of a pop, that bright red/orange color could be really well utilized. Your design is mostly just lacking in the very bright vibrant colors shown in your example and using those could really help! In my example I made some color changes, as well as trait/mutation changes that I think could help keep the design from getting so cluttered.
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Edited By Limor on 8/25/2019 at 9:31 PM.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 8/25/2019 at 9:52 PM
Post #782
Can you please copy and paste this into your design post hon. I understand it is our critique, but I would like to keep it all together if possible.
Edited By Celticnuru on 8/26/2019 at 7:16 PM.
Limor
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Posted: 8/25/2019 at 11:14 PM
Post #783
done, and with this challenge can we make multiple designs?
Shimeree
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Joined: 2/23/2017
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 12:00 AM
Post #784
Month Of Choice: December
As we all know, December is the time of Christmas, the celebration of both the year and showing appreciation to those we care about most. For most, Christmas is a time of staying indoors or playing out in the snow, but for me it's a time of travelling to the beach and spending the entire day staying out of the heat in the cool waters of the ocean. So, for my design, I have tried to combine both the reds and greens of Christmas with the blues and yellows of the beach.
Design After Critique
Using the feedback, I've darkened the lightest blue and also swapped to flower vines (I definitely feel like they look a lot better than ribbon adornments, they add the bright pop of colour while not overwhelming the blues, thank you for recommending it!). Additionally, I've darkened all of the blues (to match with the lightest blue), lightened the sandy-yellow colour (and made it less saturated), and changed A2 to a darker green (for the leaves on flower vines)
Critique
Limor, I absolutely love your design! The colours match so nicely, and I get a really warm feeling from looking at the design. However, I feel like you're design is a bit bright overall. It would be nice for the body to be a bit darker, to make both the brighter "flames" stand out and to incorporate some of the dark colours in your reference image.
Perhaps something a bit like this? (I'm sorry I'm not the best with colours)
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Edited By Shimeree on 8/26/2019 at 5:20 PM.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 6:17 AM
Post #785
Oh yes, you may:-)
Lalalanmao
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 6:30 AM
Post #786
Sorry about that, I had to go to sleep before I could make the new version
Celticnuru
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 6:56 AM
Post #787
I completely understand hon, no worries there. You still have plenty of time. Just get that up, and a copy of your design with the corrections suggested by your fellow designer to put next to your original piece and you will be good to go.
Lalalanmao
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 8:18 AM
Post #788
I think I finished all the requirements if I understood them correctly.
Wooloothedarklord
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 8:51 AM
Post #789
month: (also) December
with this design, I was trying to use some things associated with Christmas (whether that be: red white and green, ice, or chocolate
@shimeree I like your design, but I think the light blue looks too much like powder blue to be water. I also feel like if you switched out (ribbon adornment is it?) for flower vines it would look more Christmas-y.
Celticnuru
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Posted: 8/26/2019 at 9:24 AM
Post #790
Yes ma'am, you are correct:-)
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