And I oop...
Ok, so, I updated my paragraph, if thats ok.
Can I upgrade my design?
As for my critique, I just quite liked her last design. Should I add another critique? Im totally fine with doing so.
And, anything else I need to do?

red panda

now i chose a red panda because i just love theese things! they are sooo cute and... (im getting sidetracked lol) also it was one of the interesting ones on the list (no offence ) did you know they arent even ursidae? (ursidae = bear family) yeah their actually ailuridae (Ailuridae is a family in the mammal order Carnivora. The family consists of the red panda [the sole living representative] and its extinct relatives.) their natual habitat is in the temperate forests of the eastern himalayans and their endangered because of deforestation (deforestation = less trees = less leaves to eat = starvation = death) and thats why i decided to choose red pandas!

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I thought your design could use a little flair... but I wanted to make it subtle, I also thought it needed less white. so I made the c 2 trait brown then added the jungle stripes trait, and then warmed up the colors. I also made the white #FFFEF2 because I like white not completely white. but I overall really like your design

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You don't have to change anything on my account hon. I figured to give you feedback that hopefully will help you better understand what to do next time. Just remember to follow direction and critique the 1st design, not a design if they have multiples that you choose. And try not to sound so repetitive in any description and or critique you give.

As for doing another critique, no. You do not need to do another.

Again I apologize if I offended you with what I said. It just that trait didn't look quite right. But you are fine with what you did, and you didn't need to edit it unless you wanted to since you already had one critiquer. As for updating the reasoning behind the endangerment, thank you. That way it gives a little more insight into that species. NIce job!

Hey hon, your reference picture isn't visible. It is showing up for me as a broken image link. Could you re add it and or check the coding to see if there is an issue there?

Hey hon, you have 2 males for your design on your endangered species. You might want to take one out and or switch it with a female.

Also, you have a critique waiting for you by Piclethedarklord. Please address that as soon as possible.

Also, in your description why not add why they are endangered, or what is causing them to be endangered? Maybe even where they are generally located in the wild?


Otherwise, very nice start hon.

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