"know your place hunter! lest i make it omega!" storm snapped giving mist the chance to reclaim her composure.

Ash frowned. She crouched down. She hadn't meant to say it and now she so badly wish he knew how his honor had changed. She looked at Mist. She so badly wanted some dog to stop storm.

we're dogs)

mist

"now, now. i bet we're all just a little on edge because of the shortage in food and all the rouges that are so rudely interupting" mist said glancing around like she expected another rouge to show up.

storm

storm snapped his attention back to her snarling like he had rabies.

Ash walked away. Her tail was down in between her legs. She had no hope left. She knew her alpha had gone crazy. It was hopeless.

(OOC: sorry for not responding sooner. I was sick.)

~Dobhar~Firepack~Firepack Camp~

That was it, dobhar couldn't put up with Storm's behaviour any longer. With a low savage growl of the kind only a wolf could make, Dobhar confronted Storm getting closer to him than he normally would so it was impossible to ignore him and also so he stood between him and Mist.

"If you insist on continuing like this I fear I may loose my temper myself." as he said this he made certain to show his rather formidable fangs, he was no sheepdog not like Storm. His bite could crack bone unlike that of most dogs save for one or two breeds.
"I will not stand for you to intimidate my subordinates like this. Your pack may tolerate this but mine will not." with this the growls of several firepack dogs rose from the otherwise silent crowd.

In this instance it seemed inevitable what Storm's reaction would however, Dobhar hoped that the other alpha was smart enough to know to quash his anger and pride and not to fight when faced with an opponent far more suited for combat. He was bigger and stronger than Storm he couldn't possibly think it wise to fight especially not here. This would be his best means of setting things diplomatically.

Ash ran to the camp. She just wanted to be alone. She hated Storm now and he deserved no honor in her opinion. She then decided to hunt. She searched for prey.

(Before deidrials post)

storm

storm snarled one last time intending to make mist scamper off, and was suprised when the results were far from what he expected.

mist

as mist watched ash run away something seemed to click in her head and she snarled back. "you shouldn't treat your pack like that! they depend on you! your the one who decided you wanted that power so stop acting like such an eresponsible pup! mist snareled.

storm

"enough! i don't have too take this from such a USELESS she dog!" storm practically screamed. "you are nothing! abd you will bever amount to anything! you will die and not even your fleas will miss you!" storm howled.

mist

mist just seemed to break at this point, her head hung low and even her fur seemed to sag as she whimpered and backed away trying to melt into the crowd, which was difficult since the other dpgs tried to stay out of her way.

(After deidrials post)

storm

storm cackled at the defeated look in the she dogs eyes. Until dohbar stepped in. "How dare you! I am the alpha and I will intimidate who I want!" He growled in a high pitched voice. Before you could say another word. "Enough! come waterpack! we are leaving!" storm said padding away angrily.

(Like that?)

[Edit Post]

can we just pretend that post came before yours? the first half i mean. the second half were he leaves can come after your post.)

ignore this post