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Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
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Posted: 3/16/2021 at 11:02 PM Post #291
yep!
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 3/16/2021 at 11:03 PM Post #292
ahh thank you! noted :)
Lunadove
Level 70
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 9/7/2020
Threads: 174
Posts: 1,865
Posted: 3/16/2021 at 11:17 PM Post #293

I felt the green was too bold, so I think it should be dulled down a bit, It seemed to stick out, and compared to the picture you gave, it didn't fit. This was just me, and it still looked very pretty, but I felt it would fit me with your theme this way.


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Lemon Grass Tea




Critiqued:

Edited By Lunadove on 3/17/2021 at 8:41 AM.
Limor
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Posted: 3/17/2021 at 1:39 AM Post #294
please make your critique more detailed :)
Limor
Level 72
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Posted: 3/17/2021 at 1:52 AM Post #295
-- Critique --
With your design I quite like what you have so far but I think you need some more of those deep ambers in the body, the body currently is somewhat messy. I would also /maybe/ slightly make the wings darker but not much as that would disrupt that sick flow you have near the edges of the wings. Now for those dark ambers I mentioned i'd maybe try something around #9C4B1C and for the green maybe something around #6BA832 in the eyes and #4E7D23 in c3. I would also maybe try swapping the c1 and g1 though it also looks totally fine without doing this! Great job overall and honestly my suggestions can just be put down to personal preference!



-- Bengal Tiger Spice Herbal Tea --



-- Pumpkin Chai Spice --


Critiqued


-- Bai Mudan --



-- Gingseng Peach --

Edited By Limor on 3/18/2021 at 4:26 PM.
Ladybugjr
Level 71
Fancy Pants
Joined: 10/27/2018
Threads: 127
Posts: 2,515
Posted: 3/17/2021 at 11:23 AM Post #296
Thank you for your kind words about my design. I do not mond if you generate and breed the design, but just FYI I also used it for one of my Regen pairs. I sent the COD and I would also like a child of him and her if you dont mind :)
Ladybugjr
Level 71
Fancy Pants
Joined: 10/27/2018
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Posts: 2,515
Posted: 3/17/2021 at 11:59 AM Post #297
Critique

I thought that this design looked a little darker than the reference image so I decided to make it a little brighter. That way, like, the way the pumpkin sticks out on the package, your design can look more like the tea you were trying to redesign. I also changed color 2 to be a little darker to sorta match the seeds or whatever those are on the tea package

My designs
As for my designs, I actually chose a picture that had three types of tea, so I did one design for each type of tea.
Reference:

Pfrsich Tea

Revised:

Erdbeere Tea

Gruner Tea
Edited By Ladybugjr on 3/19/2021 at 10:08 PM.
Startingle
Level 65
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/19/2020
Threads: 16
Posts: 345
Posted: 3/17/2021 at 7:11 PM Post #298
Critique-
For your Pfrsich Tea Zolnixi design, it looks absolutely gorgeous, I love the traits on it, but I have a suggestion. There seems to be a bit of a pinkish-orange in the reference picture, so I had added some. In the 2nd accent I'd added an orangish-pink color, the rest of the colors seem good though!
Before-

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Modified-

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Green Tea Ny'vene design.
Original-


Modified-
Edited By Startingle on 3/19/2021 at 9:32 AM.
Startingle
Level 65
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/19/2020
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Posts: 345
Posted: 3/17/2021 at 7:37 PM Post #299
Forgot to ping.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 3/18/2021 at 4:05 PM Post #300
It's almost Sunday! Let's get those entries in!
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