DragonGem
Poppy's Pride

This design did a good job of representing a poppy field. One thing I will say about it, however, is that there seem to be large areas of red and large areas of green. if you could intertwine the colors a little more, it might look more like a poppy field. The ratio of colors, however, is pretty good. Since I am not good at putting suggestions into words, I put a new version of the same design with minor changes.

Blue Buddy Budgey

At first when I looked at the name I was like -_- wat? Then, I searched it up in google. Actually, it represents the images I found for "blue buddy budgey" that I found on google. I think that the colors could be a little bolder, but I have always liked bold, instead of pastelle. I'ts just a personal opinion. I made minor changes and put a different version of your design below. I also noticed that the beak and claws looked good yellow lol.

Melony Monarch

I wasn't sure what you were trying to make with this design, It kinda reminded me of watermelon though. Again, I think the colors could be a bit deeper. I messed with the genes and tweaked the colors, just because the back looked like it was a little empty as well. Remember, these are just personal opinions :)

Limor
These are a few of the designs I made for the nyterkie revamp
Midnight Cove

Firework

King Of The Sea

Candle Light

Green Forest

I gave some suggestions in the previous post. I just forgot to ping you.

~~ Mischevious Vixen ~~


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~~ Full Moon ~~


~~ Rainforest Serenade ~~


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~~ Devil's Rose ~~


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Criticue:

I really liked both Mignight Cove and Firework, but I tweaked a few things in the King of The Sea and Green Forest.

King of The Sea:
Before and After:


I didn't change any genes nor mutations, but I played around with the colors. I thought that the design is a little too pale, so I added a few darker hues of blue in few places and also streaked the Nyte with a little bit of a more greenish-blue color (G1 and M2). I added more yellow as well to finish up the few white spots (mostly on M2 and M1). Overall the design is nice and tidy, but a little bit bland.

Green Forest:
Before and After:


This design was a little to busy (at least in my opinion) and I got rid of the Plaguebringer's Armor, so the genes will be more visible. I really like the color scheme you used here, so I didn;t do much about that. I slightly brightened G2 and M3 and darkened C3, but besides that I left the palette untouched.

Username: leah9531
Why to you want to join the D.C.U: I really like to design sylesti's
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~ mischevious vixen ~










~ Full moon ~












~ Rainforest serenade ~









~ Devil's rose ~










Criticue:


I seriously love rainforest serenade and full moon but i made some changes to devil's rose



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After:




I just changed some colours and mutation 3. I hope you like it!

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