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Yamii
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:42 PM
Post #21
On my story I've reached the 20th page now! It's progressing! Sorry, just reached 20 pages so I'm excited.
Kiwi14
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:50 PM
Post #22
That's very cool! It's fine, I would be excited if I was able to reach 20 pages xD. Congrats!
Yamii
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:52 PM
Post #23
Yeah, thanks, just finally got somewhat far into a story I really want to finish, mainly because I've made a villian that I can be proud of XD.
Kiwi14
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:56 PM
Post #24
Oh, a good villain? All my stories I want to finish, but nah, I never do =P! Anyways very proud of you =3... now I want to read it TwT
Yamii
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 2:57 PM
Post #25
Well, if you want I can explain the basis of it.
Kiwi14
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 3:00 PM
Post #26
Sure, I would love to read about it =3
Yamii
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 3:10 PM
Post #27
So basically this is an advanced future, mainly in robotics and the medical industry. Due to this advancement, a private company created a robot to act as a substitute for humans when someone was extremely ill. These robots were next to being human. But, there was one problem with the first few made. These robots are made to prioritize their patient over everything, but this backfires in a way that made the robots obsessive. They only cared about their human and hated when others got near, going as far as killing the other humans. When hospitals spotted murders occurring in hospitals where the robots were placed. So the company called back the robots before the law got involved. The company hastily destroyed the robots and making new models that didn't have the problem. But, one robot wasn't destroyed, thankfully since it wasn't attached to anyone it remained idle. It lay in a hospital closet for years, until, it was activated. That's a summary of the robots.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 3:11 PM
Post #28
My ways of writing? Well, I never write before 8PM lol. As for the too many ideas, write them together. Find out some way to combine them!
Kiwi14
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 3:13 PM
Post #29
That's a very cool concept! I like it! But then again I like most things xD
Kiwi14
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Posted: 11/5/2020 at 3:16 PM
Post #30
I wish I could write in the middle of the night! Write them together... chaotic x 10000 xD. Thanks for the advice, I will use it to create absolute Chaos *evil laugh*
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