Well, that was underwhelming, tho i smiled at the guy eather way. "Not realy i came in thinking it was a pet shop but i guess i was wrong on that point. On the bright side you wont nead to kick me out for trying to pet a tarentula."

"Heh. True. Definitely dont pet jsut my animal in here....mos tof them are my little brother's and I swear he trained them to attack on command." Al laughs. "And yeha. This is a hardware store, technically but...well, let's jsut say that if theres room, my siblings use it for their own little ventures. No pet shop in town so he cat crazy duo went and stuck a unh of pet supplies in the cornor. I figured it was a good investment with all the pets in town and....well it exploded from there."

" Well, if i ever get a dog i know where to go to get some supply at least." I joked while wondering if he was speaking of the same cat guy as Inno spoke about, it would make sens since they were located near my street.

"Heh, yup." Al grins. Tilting his head a bit he asks. "Hey, you're with that new family down the road across from the Marker place right? I met your mom earlier. Wanted someone to come fix a toaster. If you see a really goth guy around your age come knocking later, that's my lily's bro, he's probably there to fix it."

Lol its fine
I'd prefer if personality was set (the main points at least) to make things easier tho what you have already is fine.

Word descriptions ar define jsut put oen in.

You might want to finish editing the form (appearance and such) sicne I just qoute the post. Otherwise looks alrijt.

Preferably Yes but not neceaarily

Looks good heres your start



Its around two weeks before school starts up and your parents finally decided you needed to get out and meet some people your age instead of spending all day with a book. Hence, you find yourself on the porch with the instructions of, be back by dinnertime" and the while afternoon in front of you.

To your left you can see a welcoming looking house with a ell-dressed (as in, the latest fashions without the expensive clothes) boy with cobalt and red hair tryign and fialing to teach a poodle to sit. The poodle just keeps getting very distracted by the boys shoes.

To your right is what is practically a mansion, where a bunch of blond boys are lounging abot and occassionally getting into small tussles while an older boy around your age watches form the shade of a large leafy tree near the street.

The park iss just about visible down the road. Heres a library and market area there.

Where do you go?