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Forum Index > Groups, Guilds, Clubs, and Services > ~*~ DESIGNERS' CHALLENGE UNIVERSITY...
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Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 9/4/2019 at 4:42 PM Post #871
@Freki
First, I should start with saying that your design is awesome! I was stuck for a bit wondering how I should tweak it. I then realised that, one, you didn't include a yellowy yellow(you only did orangey yellow), or a light green, and two, A1 wasn't filled in. So I did that for you. As well as that, I changed one of the brown colours and made some colours lighter or darker. I hope this looks better ._. It's a pretty small tweak, because your design was originally great!
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Your Design- - - - -Your Design with Tweaks

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Halloween Festivities
I personally, really quite like Halloween, as well as Ryori. Halloween and Ryori fit together perfectly.

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@Koterfaye
Thank you for your critique! I altered amdswitched some colours, as well as making some lighter. I hope it looks better now!
Tweaked Design
Edited By Sairento on 9/6/2019 at 4:10 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 9/4/2019 at 7:24 PM Post #872
I will be doing updates in the morning everyone, and posting the first Entries Thus Far post for this challenge. Keep up the great work!
Edited By Celticnuru on 9/7/2019 at 4:13 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 9/5/2019 at 8:35 AM Post #873
ENTRIES THUS FAR Post 1
"Autumn's Challenge"


Below are the entries thus far, that have met all the requirements fully. If you do not see your name and or designs below that would be 1 of 2 reasons. The first being that you have yet to submit a design for this challenge yet. And the second being, that you have not met all the requirements. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Otherwise good luck, and remember deadline is this Sunday at 5pm CST.

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Limor's Designs:

(Original Design)


(Altered Design)


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Freki's Designs:

(Original Design)


(Altered Design)


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Sai's Designs:

(Original Design)


(Altered Design)


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Koterfaye's Designs:

(Original Design)


(Altered Design)


(Other Autumn Designs)


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Red's Designs:

(Starlit Trail Lupora)


(Gold Finch Aurleon)

Edited By Celticnuru on 9/10/2019 at 7:04 AM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 9/5/2019 at 8:41 AM Post #874
Bunny, we are still waiting on those reference pictures for your designs. Remember all aspects of each requirement is needed, you can't pick and choose. I know you said you would put them up, but it has been a couple of days and we still don't see them. I know you want your designs to be eligible, and I value your time as a designer. Make sure to get those up ASAP.

Art and Sunny, I see you both were talking of a design. I hope to see it soon. Remember you both have until this Sunday at 5pm CST to get your designs in.

Sai, we are waiting on another designer to come in so that you can receive your critique and there by complete all requirements for your design. I hope that is soon hon. If no one else does by the time deadline rolls around which would be a shame...I will not hold it against you and will place your design into the entries thus far post.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 7:51 AM Post #875
Yes, unfortunately that design is not eligible. Remember each design needs to meet all the requirements to be eligible. I would advise against putting anything in the design post that isn't eligible and or won't meet all the requirements.

Also, you still are in need of your altered piece. Revisit your critiquers post to see what they are suggesting for improvement. Then recreate your design they are critiquing using some if not all of their suggestions. Place that altered verison next to your original design to complete that requirement.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 7:57 AM Post #876
Good Morning,

I am PINGing you all, because I have not seen any action from any of you with this challenge. For some of you that is not normal, and other it is quite normal. As a result it concerns me a good bit. I hope everything is ok on your end, and nothing terrible or too stressful is keeping you from participating. Remember if you are not able to post for this challenge to please let me know that you are opting out. Just remember in doing so, do not opt out often or too many times in a row. You all still have plenty of time to get your designs in, but the longer you wait the more difficult for you and your fellow designers it becomes. So try not to wait too long. Otherwise, good luck!
Edited By Celticnuru on 9/8/2019 at 8:32 AM.
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 10:08 AM Post #877
Critique:
Your design was a little dark and messy, I suggest you make a few traits lighter/darker to add more depth, plus it seemed very wild. I changed a few traits to make it look less messy in my critique.

Original:


Critique:


My Design/s:

Pumpkin Pie Puffadore:



Altered Version:





Fall Trail Lupora:



Edited By Koterfaye on 9/7/2019 at 11:01 PM.
Twinkleunicorn
Level 60
Stocking Stuffer
Joined: 8/17/2018
Threads: 119
Posts: 3,199
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 12:56 PM Post #878
fallen angel aerdini

hellfire aurleon

autmn leaves bulbori

Autumn Harbringer Drayel

Grim reaper faelora

Satan ferrikki

Autumn guardian griffi

Hell keeper kelpari

fire keeper lighra

cursed temple luffox

the virus lunemara

vampire lupora

zombified wyvern morokko

Demonic nephini

reaper ny'vene

voodoo doll nytekrie

pumpkin puffadore

Autumn bringer qitari

cursed king ryori

cotton candy sylvorpa

Burning flame vulnyx

fall leaf zolnixi

please criticise
Edited By Twinkleunicorn on 9/10/2019 at 9:38 AM.
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 1:00 PM Post #879
You need to criticize my first design, then the person who posts after you criticizes your first design. I don't mean to sound rude, but you need to read the rules fully before you post. You also need reference pictures.
Edited By Koterfaye on 9/6/2019 at 1:01 PM.
Twinkleunicorn
Level 60
Stocking Stuffer
Joined: 8/17/2018
Threads: 119
Posts: 3,199
Posted: 9/6/2019 at 1:02 PM Post #880
the pumpkin pie puffadore looks great and the fall trail lupora needs a little tweaking on the traits to fit the image
Edited By Twinkleunicorn on 9/6/2019 at 1:03 PM.
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