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Limor
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Joined: 7/5/2016
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Posted: 1/6/2020 at 2:03 AM
Post #1481
So with your design I quite like it, it has good color choices. Now for my main thing I would suggest is darkening the blue too create more of a nightsky illusion. I would also suggesting adding a bit more color saturation in the wings, too help with the bright firework idea. Overall it is a nice design and I think only a few tweaks could be made to better it. Generally making all your cool colors darker and your warm colors lighter/brighter your designs will have a generally more contrasty and flashy design. I think your design is wonderful and has some great building blocks for easy improvement.
-- New Year's Sparklers --
-- Sparkling Blue New Year's Cocktail --
Edited By Limor on 1/8/2020 at 8:09 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 1/6/2020 at 6:38 AM
Post #1482
Thank you for the heads up. I do apologize about that. I have since fixed it. It now says Sai.
Celticnuru
Level 70
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Posted: 1/6/2020 at 6:46 AM
Post #1483
Very well done Limor. Your critique is a bit broad on the specifics on what did work well, as to what you would change too. I understand the colors to make more saturation or to make the colors pop. But what specifically did you like about the design? Or what specifically would you have changed? Also, you forgot to PING. Other than that, your designs for your New Year's Bash submission are very interesting. Your take on the mixed drinks are very intriguing. I will leave the specific feedback to your critiquer. Otherwise good luck!
Articu
Level 70
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Joined: 4/20/2016
Threads: 146
Posts: 1,782
Posted: 1/6/2020 at 7:40 AM
Post #1484
i think i'll pass on the pet this time ^^; my stables are a bit more crowded than i'd like at the moment
Celticnuru
Level 70
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Joined: 12/17/2017
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Posts: 4,998
Posted: 1/6/2020 at 11:54 AM
Post #1485
No problem on that. I try and add new ones and rotate new prettier ones in but it doesn't always end up that way. Please send me another COD for 25K.
Edited By Celticnuru on 1/9/2020 at 7:56 AM.
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 1/6/2020 at 11:20 PM
Post #1486
New Year's Celebration
Critique
I suggest adding a bit more red, as there isnt much yellow/gold in the photo. I also suggest making the mane and M3 slightly lighter, as there isnt much dark red in the photo either. Also, Lups are your least favourite species? O.O [Sorry if that sounded a little rude]
However, you Design is really pretty. The red and yellow match flawlessly, and the flecks on the mane look a bit like gold. The traits you picked out were very nice as well.
Edited By Sairento on 1/8/2020 at 11:09 PM.
Danithegoat
Level 72
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 2/2/2019
Threads: 45
Posts: 1,440
Posted: 1/7/2020 at 10:28 AM
Post #1487
New Year's Dance
Faelora style
Critique Edit
Critique for Sai
So I changed the design back to how it was, however I changed G1 from 4EC1F2 to C77E00 since the light blue kind of feels out of place compared to the rest of the design. I changed M1 from 6ED8FF to 264075 to match the cloak color.
I really love your design, the Shamen Dust just brings the whole design together. I love the yellow, the sudden burst of color and the highlights of it everywhere else just really stand out to me. Overall, your design is amazing and I love it.
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Edited By Spiritbeast on 1/8/2020 at 12:34 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 1/7/2020 at 9:27 PM
Post #1488
Everyone, I will be doing updates tomorrow. Remember to read all the requirements, there are 6 of them. If you don't read all 6, it will show in your work that you did not follow direction. Remember there are 6 requirements. I threw a semi-hidden requirement after the critiques,the 6th one. I did/do that to see if people are reading everything, and that is where I usually catch people off guard because they missed that one little requirement. Be sure to read everything in the posts, do not skim. I know we have gone over this numerous times. So please be aware of all 6 requirements. That hidden one (6th one in this case.) Usually is a stumper or a hidden gem. Be sure to look, read, and create. ENJOY!
Edited By Celticnuru on 1/7/2020 at 9:29 PM.
Opipearl
Level 62
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 10/10/2019
Threads: 8
Posts: 384
Posted: 1/7/2020 at 10:45 PM
Post #1489
Just to clarify the rules a bit we can use restricted traits and the size can be bigger than 300, but we must use our least favorite species, and one only 1 gender of said species.
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
Threads: 164
Posts: 7,943
Posted: 1/7/2020 at 11:02 PM
Post #1490
Wait. Rule 6 rules out 1 & 3.
So we can use restricted traits...
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