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Sairento
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High Priest
Joined: 8/24/2018
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Posted: 10/28/2019 at 12:03 AM
Post #1121
OwO, thank you! Ill send the CoD!
Personally, I LOVE the design of the phantom
But I hate them, especially when you are building something high...
Sairento
Level 75
High Priest
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Posted: 10/28/2019 at 12:29 AM
Post #1122
Dream Wanderer Yume Dream Wanderer, or, Yume[Yume is her name. Dream Wanderer is her title], wanders through people dreams as her title suggests. She brings those who have nightmares to peace, by calming them with her ability. She appears in the dreams under an illusion, under a different name, to bring them peace. As well as this, she creates clones of herself so that she can calm everyone at once. No one knows her true look[Except Sai and herself], and no one knows who she is, whether she is alive or not, or if she is a god.
Powers: -Wanders through dreams
-Turns nightmares to dreams
-Dream illusions
-Clones herself to calm everyone
Critiqued: I've dulled the blue in the robes, brighten them in the wings and darkened the tattoo. Thanks for your critique!
Edited By Sairento on 10/29/2019 at 1:05 PM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 7:57 AM
Post #1123
No I understand. Take it easy, and tend to what needs tending to. I wish you the best and we will see you next week!
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 10:36 AM
Post #1124
I need to opt out this week, I've got a lot of tests this week and need all the time I can get to study. Sorry!
Irae
Level 62
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/26/2018
Threads: 88
Posts: 1,574
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 10:47 AM
Post #1125
NAME: Poeticthoughts
PREFERED NAME: P
PLAYER ID: 116504
NAME OF FAV. SPECIES IN SYLESTIA: Zols!
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
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Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 11:05 AM
Post #1126
Understandable, so no worries there. Good luck with them hon, and we wll see you next week.
Edited By Celticnuru on 10/30/2019 at 9:50 AM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 11:07 AM
Post #1127
You have been approved for membership and participation for challenges. Welcome back to the D.C.U.!
Edited By Celticnuru on 10/31/2019 at 6:24 AM.
Irae
Level 62
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/26/2018
Threads: 88
Posts: 1,574
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 11:50 AM
Post #1128
My critique: Let me start off the fact that she's just pretty. I love the pastel colors of the outfit, it fits nicely with what she does. However, the shiny bright blue of the dress don't quite fit right, instead of how about dulling the bright blue a little. Furthering that statement it would be nice for the wings to brighten the blue. Lastly, how about darkening the tattoo a bit?
EX: BEFORE: AFTER
Peace bringer: Saffron
OLD EDITED
He is known throughout the land as the Peace Bringer, Renewer Of Hope, and Feast Summoner. However, his real name is that of Saffron. Saffron is worshipped amongst some people as a god of the autumn season, also known as fall for the good deeds that he does. And even though Saffron delights in the activities he does, he feels so utterly alone. The reason for that is, that Saffron is in a constant state of motion. He moves from place to place helping those in need as he goes. He only has a small group of individuals that he can actual call his friends that know if his plight and loneliness. But that matters not! For he thinks of others, before he thinks of himself
Powers:
Calms everyone
physical healing,
can summon extra food,
and start autumn
Edited By Poeticthoughts on 10/30/2019 at 10:45 AM.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/28/2019 at 6:58 PM
Post #1129
Very nice start, very nice. Your critique however needs to be 3 to 4 sentences long, and needs to point out specific parts you thought worked well as well as specific areas that could be improved on. Not only that but you do need a reference picture to show visible representation of what you believe should be improved. If you can get that big fixed before deadline that will be great and all we are waiting on is a critiquer for you to post.
Celticnuru
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/17/2017
Threads: 244
Posts: 4,998
Posted: 10/29/2019 at 9:39 AM
Post #1130
All right folks, this is your mid week reminder about FRIDAY'S deadline. Remember to get your submissions in, make any corrections you need to make, and or place in your critiqued pieces before 5pm on Friday. The reason for this sorta short challenge, is that after the deadline I will make one final update to the Entries Thus Far post once it is up. After that, I will send a mass group PING out giving you directions that I want you all to follow. Those directions will consist of "PRIVATE MESSAGING" or PM rather the TOP 3 from that entries thus far post. Please by any means do anything until I give the go a head on that voting aspect. And please please follow directions when I do. I don't want you posting in the group thread any votes. Again I will let you know in when and what to do again once it is time.
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