Okay, no more messing with this thing x.x never been this close to a deadline before.

Genre: Memoir
Trait: Aloof
Timeline: Renaissance
Species: Pricolici

Enjoy~

Hi, so I edited my post on the bottom of page 9. I ran out of time to do the ending. :(
Hope you like the section I finished.

ok great.

Does anyone need an extension? I'll gift you guys an extension so now it'll be...


10:30AM (game time)

i think i picked 1? (anyways heres my story)

Torn from home:
storm sighs, i know i can do this.. i have to, for them storm turns to her village as they wave and shoat their goodbyes. her little brother runs up to her, hugging her tightly. "il miss you", he says with a sad sigh.
"don't worry Kinje, il be fine." Kinje drops his arms and walks back to mother and father. as she gets up on her horse and gallops away, storm looks back. il be back, i promised.

storm rode through the woods, hair lashing against her back. she had to get over the mountain in 4 days, and get medicine or else the village might be nothing but bodies soon. they lived in the mountains, were hardly any medicinal herbs grew. if she got over the mountain, and into the next town, she would bring back plenty to treat her village. as she rode on through the trees she caught something in the edge of her vision, and quickly ducked. a branch just barely hit her! with such force she would've been knocked off! a simple branch couldn't let me stop my quest!

looking over the hill, she spotted the village, shed camped and hunted at the end of each of the 3 days. today was the forth day. she quickly rode down entering the village as some people shouted at her for almost running them over. "sorry!" storm apologized quickly. she tied her horse to the fence of the mayors house, went inside. storm found the mayor talking to the village doctor about the sickness that had been spreading across the land. they looked up when they heard her come in. why are you in here?! also who are you? you are not any of the people living here i can assure! i'm here for herbs to treat my village over the mountains, the people have fallen sick! but why should we give you our supplies? we might get sick as well! prove to us that we should give you some of our valuable supplies? because a noble leader would do just that, to help other people in need. "you are a fit mayor right? the mayor looks nervous while his doctor and storm stare at him expectantly. of course il give you some supplies! he finally gives in. storm thanks him and the doctor leads her to the herb storage.

she thanks the mayor as she rides off again towards home. 'now i can save my village', she says to herself. riding through the forest path swiftly, dodging branches and ditches, storm makes her way home. sometimes stopping to let her horse rest, then riding on again. she hardly slept but kept riding on.

she entered her village, people slowly moving through the streets, barely anyone outside. she walks in the doctors hut, a lot of people lay on stretchers, coughing and throwing up. doctor Hanna rushed up to storm. you have them? she says expectantly. "of course" Thank you! she hands her the 2 bags of herbs and then asks, "were is Kinje? im surprised he wasn't waiting when i came back" the doctor says nervously,"hes not been doing well, i think hes the worse out of all of them.." you can go see him.. she opens a flap into a small room with Kinje lying on a mat. "storm?" he asks. his voice weak and scratchy. Yes! kinje im here! don't worry it will be alright now. tears begin streaming down her face, just looking at his small fragile body, knowing he wouldn't make it. "don't worry, Kinje, itl be OK." itl be OK, she hugged him tight, feeling the warmth fading from his body. don't worry... itl be ok..

Sorry but that was the first round, which has ended, this is the second round.

Ok so does the theme change? Or do i just keep tje story

theme changes

and unfortunately you aren't in this one, come again for next contest

Sorry - I just got back into town Baney, but I really appreciate you holding the contest and letting me participate. :) It was a lot of fun to try my hand at writing. I wish you only the best of luck with the remainder of the rounds. :D