Love the pups, love the female.. something off with the male, maybe its the tail.. maybe its the front legs.. they seem short to me some how.

I like the longer hair......it looks amazing

They are all so adorable!! The only problem I have is that the male pup seems a little... off? Maybe to similiar to the puff male but idk! Still cute tho!

Very nice indeed. The wavy fur further differentiates them from Zolnixies.

Hopefully constructive comments--

1. I like that the male has more expression, but he looks sad. Maybe lift his head up and back a bit, to give him a sort of challenging or defiant stance? And have him looking forward instead of to the side? I think that might result in a more positive expression for him.

2. People have already made intelligent comments about the leg length.

3. I like the grace of the female's body shape. Perhaps the male could look more muscular?

4. The ears might look better if they were a bit smaller.

5. I'm puzzled as to why the male retains the puppy characteristic of heavy fur on the underside, but the female doesn't. IMO, either both adults should retain the trait or neither should.

Overall, these look like excellent sketches. I must acquire more Luporas.

I LOVE THEM!!!!!! SOOO BEAUTIFUL AND MAJESTIC!!

That looks awesome!

I absolutely love the fluff - the other back leg on the female kind of disappears into the tail though. Perhaps the leg could be re-positioned so it's more visible? The front legs on both could be bent a little more like on the babies. That might make them seem a little longer in comparison with the fluffier body. There could also be a mutation later on which gives them fluffier/less fluffy tails, so that there's the option to have both a super fluffy pet or one that shows off the markings more. ^.^

Dear lord all that floof. I could die

Oooo! I love them.

Sorry if this goes past constructive criticism. I don't mean to, but I still want to point out things I personally see a little off and think needs fixing. Also, to see if others agree.

Here are a few things I personally think needs fixing:
I find the legs of the adult female Lupora is a little too short. It may just be me, but it makes her head seem too big in comparison to the rest of her body, and her chest too large, also. Same thing goes for the male, only its just his legs.

Is it just me or do the babies necks seem too short?

So floof! I love it! But I do agree, the adult's legs do look a little short because of the mane fur, and I also feel like it would cover up genes on both adults' hind legs. Also... is it just me, or does the adult female's snout look longer and thicker (wider? has more girth?) than the adult male's? I honestly find that a bit weird, not trying to be nitpicky. But overall, I'd say the designs are great!