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Forum Index > Pet Sharing and Design Discussion > ~Festival Themed Design Masterthread: Cr...
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Theialish
Level 70
Warden of Umbra
Joined: 2/8/2019
Threads: 60
Posts: 4,986
Posted: 6/16/2020 at 3:53 PM Post #11



Design Name: Vibrant Blossom Sylvorpa
Overall Rating (out of 10): 7.8/10 (GeT iT?)
Criticism: Pretty nice for a vorpa theme. I must ask, where's your reference image? It seems hard to judge it without a reference.

Also, why blossom? 1) blossoms are usually spring, and 2) we have nightly blossom ryo

As for the colors, they synergize quite well. Looks a bit bland with the traits you're showcasing, but eh.

Overall, not much I have to say bad.

Other Notes: I have my summer themed up too! They even have refs posted (minus the sunburn vul)!





Design Name:Midsummer Night Ferrikki
Overall Rating (out of 10): 8.5/10
Criticism: Again, where's the ref image? I'll be able to update this with the ref.

I like how it's shaded and blended, but the orb is kinda hard to see. Maybe make it a bit more noticeable?

Not bad in my view. Looks pretty good, I kinda wish my spring rikki submission lived up to that..



Oh my gawsh it's even better with vict drape!
Other Notes: My water sprite rikki could have some competition...

Edited By Animaspectra on 6/16/2020 at 4:06 PM.
Sonrisa
Level 75
Ghost Writer
Joined: 3/27/2017
Threads: 253
Posts: 3,577
Posted: 6/17/2020 at 8:43 AM Post #12
Thank you very much for this. I definitely see where you are coming from on the Nephini, and the alternates you proposed do look better in some aspects.
Not too harsh, you were quite polite about it, actually ^.^
Sonrisa
Level 75
Ghost Writer
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Threads: 253
Posts: 3,577
Posted: 6/17/2020 at 8:45 AM Post #13
I usually do not use reference pics, I use a color palette I like and come up with a matching name.
Thank you for the criticism!
Mythnomer
Level 75
Omniscient Gardener
Joined: 6/2/2018
Threads: 34
Posts: 602
Posted: 6/23/2020 at 8:26 PM Post #14
I really adore the Aeridini

I might suggest on the bulb making the blue more towards green, but I get the dew reference as well.

The sylvorpa is a cool design though it does feel fall to me but I would totally collect them.maybe move a color in other than orange?
Lenore
Level 75
Sylestiologist
Joined: 2/3/2015
Threads: 52
Posts: 735
Posted: 6/23/2020 at 11:19 PM Post #15
Design Name: Dewy Strawberry Bulbori

Overall Rating: 6.5/10

Criticism: I love the premise of the theme, but the dewiness gets a little lost in the saturation of the pet. Could also use some more blue rather than a single trait accent.

Other Notes: When I think of dew, I think of soft light in the early morning. Ive desaturated the theme a bit and added some blue.

Ex:
Sonrisa
Level 75
Ghost Writer
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Threads: 253
Posts: 3,577
Posted: 6/25/2020 at 3:30 PM Post #16
Thank you! I will fix them up, your examples helped quite a bit.
Mythnomer
Level 75
Omniscient Gardener
Joined: 6/2/2018
Threads: 34
Posts: 602
Posted: 6/26/2020 at 10:06 AM Post #17
Design Name: Strawberry Luminary Luffox
Overall Rating (out of 10):8
Criticism: Only thing I can think of is maybe move the yellow peach color more towards a pink peach
Other Notes:
Mythnomer
Level 75
Omniscient Gardener
Joined: 6/2/2018
Threads: 34
Posts: 602
Posted: 6/26/2020 at 12:19 PM Post #18
Design: Lavender Fairy Ring Nephini
6.5/10
I really like the concept behind them but they read winter more than fall to me, maybe move away from the purplish pale tint into more of a red. I'm not sure but some warmth may be good
Sunflora
Level 71
Ghost Writer
Joined: 6/6/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 536
Posted: 6/30/2020 at 9:51 PM Post #19
Design Name: Flamingo Float Aeridini

Overall Rating (out of 10): 5/10

Criticism: The idea is great, however, the design itself is a bit chaotic and repetitive. I would remove the green entirely as it conflicts with the other colors and instead, use varying shades of blue and pink. That way, there is a more harmonious contrast in your design!


Comparison:


I really hope this helps! Good luck and have fun! ^^
Sonrisa
Level 75
Ghost Writer
Joined: 3/27/2017
Threads: 253
Posts: 3,577
Posted: 7/1/2020 at 9:34 AM Post #20
Wow, I love the edit. Thanks a lot, definitely going to change that up a bit.
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