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Limor
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/15/2018 at 7:49 PM
Post #1
This thread is a thread meant to help others get help with there design! Make sure if you are giving critique to make it helpful and not just negative!
So pretty much you are going to be rating the design about you out of 10 and giving your thoughts on it! What you like dislike, what could be changed, colors you like, etc etc
If you have any questions ping me!
Rules
- Must have around 3 sentences about the design
- Feel free to post some examples of what you think they could change (keep size to 250 and below please)
- Ratings are given out of ten with an explanation. If you don't do so, you will get a warning and then a ban
- Only post one design/color pallet at a time
- If posting for a color pallet you may only post up to 2 examples of it (keep size to 250 and below please)
- Give helpful criticism not just negative critique!
- Include if your design is a design of specific traits (set design)(like a breeding project) or a color set (like a themed design)
- Based on this thread on ToyHouse, so check here if you need examples of how it works!
- Wait for 2 people to go or 12 hours to pass before posting again
Basic Form to Use when Posting (Red = For Them, Green = For You)
Rating(1-10): A rating from 1-10
Explain rating:
Why you gave the design the rating you did
Your design:
post your design here
Anything you'd like to say about your design:
Include if it's a color pallet or set design, you can include things like references here as well and also the design name. Pretty much just anything you want to say about it. Perhaps what you want focused on?
Ping the person you are rating, this is a must
Banned Players:
To start it off: My design: Anything you'd like to say about your design:
Fall Fest 2018 design, Sugar Skull Nephini, Color Pallet design, how are the colors?
Edited By Limor on 10/15/2018 at 8:03 PM.
Griffinquill
Level 60
Ghost Writer
Joined: 9/17/2017
Threads: 124
Posts: 3,965
Posted: 10/15/2018 at 10:23 PM
Post #2
Rating:
7/10
Rating Explained:
This design is very colorful and obviously took some thinking and focus to create. The only problem is.... it doesn't make me think of a sugar skull. There isn't enough white. This makes me think more.... well, I'm not sure. But the sugar part of the skull just isn't getting to me, because I don't see much white. I provided an image to show what I mean by the sugar part.
My Design:
Details:
My plan for a serial killer design or something rather scary for the fall fest. I'm not sure about the color scheme and maybe if some of the traits work or if there's some better ones I could use.
Edited By Griffinquill on 10/15/2018 at 10:37 PM.
Skor
Level 75
Luck of the Draw
Joined: 6/26/2018
Threads: 53
Posts: 1,707
Posted: 10/15/2018 at 10:41 PM
Post #3
Rating:
6
Explain Rating:
For Themed design contests, we are supposed to create a color palette, not a specific pet. I like the way the traits work with the pet design, but you have to take into consideration the other genes/mutations. (This is why most people post 2 completely different 6vis designs, to showcase how the traits work with the color scheme.) Also, I'm not trying to be mean by saying this, but the colors are a little...uninspired. Don't get me wrong, I love the combination of red and black, but those are very common for project and theme designs. That might make it a little difficult to be chosen. Again, just trying to be constructive, I don't mean to sound negative!
My design:
What I'd like to say about my design:
I'm considering making this a max stat project. It's supposed to resemble Tungsten - I've always been fascinated by the natural beauty of this element. I am happy with the traits I chose and most of the colors, but I found it a bit hard to find a good color for the A2, which shows up as yellow on the Lunar Pearl Armor. Thoughts?
Edited By Skor on 10/15/2018 at 10:42 PM.
Limor
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/16/2018 at 9:52 PM
Post #4
Rating(1-10):
9
Explain rating:
I love love the colors. The only issue I can really see with it the orange dust. It almost looks a little brown on the tail area and blends with the body. I suggest upping the orange on it. On the pearl armor I actually like the yellow color. Perhaps brighten the yellow/gold on it a bit? I think it fits well with the design though!
Your design: Anything you'd like to say about your design
Fall Fest Theme Design Color Pallet -- I myself am not that happy with the design but I really like the idea of a 'Clown Flower Puffadore' and I am determined to make it work. I cannot decide what color is throwing it off but something is. Any help would be greatly appreciated it. Also feel free to be harsh and tell me whats wrong and stuff, I would love to know
Limor
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 10/17/2018 at 10:32 PM
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Limor
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 12/25/2018 at 10:30 PM
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Rubycookie
Level 70
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 9/24/2017
Threads: 101
Posts: 76,334
Posted: 12/29/2018 at 8:56 PM
Post #7
Rating:7
Its really nice, but the green clashes with the red and white. I feel like it would've been better if it was a color that look better with red and white. The wings for the male aren't really a nice touch. If you switched the armor with the wings and the wings with the armor and horn, it would look much better because of the way the bodies are positioned. The white is also throwing the face off a bit, just off the edge.
My design~
Took a while, cause the colors clashed with the traits and mutations. Really fun thou
Edited By Rubycookie on 12/29/2018 at 8:59 PM.
Eyelashviper
Level 64
Joined: 10/23/2018
Threads: 225
Posts: 4,780
Posted: 12/30/2018 at 7:35 AM
Post #8
rating:9
Very good, the colors all stand out, making it look almost neon. The design really goes with the colors. It almost looks like a rainbow, or unicorn colors. (srry so short)
my design:
Sorry new to img thing (learned it today)
I am inspired by dragons to make this Ny'vene design
Edited By Eyelashviper on 12/30/2018 at 7:35 AM.
Cuba
Level 61
Trickster
Joined: 8/3/2018
Threads: 4
Posts: 547
Posted: 12/30/2018 at 11:39 AM
Post #9
8/10
I do really like how the blues/ turquoise blend, but the right pink throws me off a bit. I think to make it blend would be to use a navy blue or something to bring in the black a bit more. Overall the design is very pretty, although like I said, personally the pink just takes away to the beauty of the blues/ turquoise.
My design
This design I made for a pair of regens. I was trying to go for something snowy, but it didn't turn out like I expected. I like how the blue goes with the white and black, but it looks like it missing something. If you can help that would be wonderful!
Dragongem23
Level 63
The Tender
Joined: 7/19/2017
Threads: 254
Posts: 25,229
Posted: 1/9/2019 at 10:09 PM
Post #10
Rating
8/10
Why?
I really love the color's and all but the flowers give me the wrong vibes.I just don't know why.And i know this was beforehand the whole new genes but i tried it with the Ice Wings and it looked .I know from experience.(Trying to make balto...) that the whole icy vibe can be hard to grasp.Another idea for the wins if to don't want the ice isn't to somehow add a greenish blue to make them seem like the borealis.
My design
This is something i have re-genned.But not into a breedable pair by accident.Whoops.I based it off the curse of the Ultima,a Aphamau/werewolf thing.Reds blacks greys and some ivory.Thats what i got stuck with.I never got any ideas on what people thought of it so here's my chance
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