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Sakurakuromi
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Posted: 5/30/2019 at 6:11 PM
Post #21
Thank you, I'm really happy you like it ^^
I was a bit worried about my wording as English isn't my native language ^^*
I only have written 4 poems in English so far, but I'll try my best to write more for here ^^
Figmir
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Joined: 1/9/2018
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 11:13 AM
Post #22
of course, and your English shouldn't matter,
but if you ever want help we're willing to help.
Sakurakuromi
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 12:24 PM
Post #23
Thank you ^^
As for my English, maybe someone could tell me if I may have made a bad mistake in using the language while writing poems?
I try to avoid mistakes, but sometimes it's inevitable. ^^*
Grapejuice
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 12:44 PM
Post #24
Sakura I absolutely loved your rain poem it gave me chills!
I have a question though, for a class project we have to take a poem or rhym and turn it into a song with singing and instruments. I was wondering if I could use yours. I will take no credit for the creation of the poem and it wont be leaving the school classroom but I still wanted to ask permission and see if I could use it for the project.
Sakurakuromi
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 1:09 PM
Post #25
Thank you so much. I'm really happy you like it ^^
If you want to use it for your school project you can ^^
Just maybe one question:
If there may be an instrumental version for it or such, could I maybe hear it as well?
(I'm just curious how it would sound like as a song ^^ If there is no record of music or anything that's totally fine as well ^^ I'm just curious xD)
Edited By Sakurakuromi on 5/31/2019 at 1:21 PM.
Grapejuice
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 1:49 PM
Post #26
Oh ofcourse you can! Ill send you a link or audio file when its finoshed!
Sakurakuromi
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Posted: 5/31/2019 at 3:00 PM
Post #27
That would be really awesome! Thank you ^o^
Scoutwolf
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Posted: 6/3/2019 at 4:42 PM
Post #28
WOLVES - by me (Aka. Scoutwolf)
Wonderful
Onward ho
Loners or not
Very friendly
Ever curious
Surprises around every corner
Sakurakuromi
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Joined: 3/2/2019
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Posted: 6/5/2019 at 12:13 PM
Post #29
Another one of my older Poems ^^
SNOW STORM
The Sun is shining, I'm taking a walk
Just like the time we had a talk.
Normally we would walk together,
but first your cough have to get better
So this time I am walking alone
looking this long, long hill down.
I walked and walked, mile after mile
when I decided to take a break for a while.
I am hungry and tired, so I think I will eat
and soon after that I fell deep, deep asleep.
How long have I slept? I did not know.
All I know was the sun has stopped to show.
In the dark sky I could see the clouds piling up
to hurry back home I decided after I felt a drop.
I looked in the sky again - I saw a storm is coming.
But wait! A Drop? No, it was not! It was not raining, but snowing!
As fast as I could, I tried running home, mile after mile.
Now, I could see the city and it doesn't felt like a while.
Back in the city I run through the streets,
Wished to lie down under my warm sheets.
The snow was cold, the wind was strong,
Well how could my peaceful walk go so wrong?
There it is! The door to my House, to my room.
After i warmed up again, what was I doing, soon?
Yes, I watched the snow storm out there.
Sitting in front of the shut window and stare.
Now I'm all hugged up in this is wonderful warm.
Dreaming about being out there without getting any harm
Its funny, isn't it? First i wanted to be home as fast as I could,
now I would love to go out, even knowing that not what I should
But do you see this wonderful glitter?
These little, little ice-splitter?
Do you see the snow swirling around?
So many you cant them even count?
Yes its dangerous, but wonderful!
So I love to watch the storm cheerful.
Michii
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Joined: 7/12/2019
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Posted: 8/31/2019 at 6:47 AM
Post #30
Excuse me, how de we join?
I do poetry as mandatory subject at school, i'm pretty good at it and would like to join, but sadly I don't know how.
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