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Hiraeth
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Posted: 8/29/2020 at 2:42 PM
Post #281
He's like that teacher fresh out of college that wants to be your dad but has anger issues. x)
Kittyauthor
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Joined: 5/22/2018
Threads: 74
Posts: 3,270
Posted: 8/29/2020 at 2:44 PM
Post #282
Yeah. Sorta like that student teacher in my science class freshman year but with my brother's temper.
As one can see, I never had an angry student teacher ever.
But yeah. It's hilarious. I'm loving it so far.
Hiraeth
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Posted: 8/29/2020 at 2:50 PM
Post #283
Hehe. I'm so glad you like it! It means a lot to me! :3 Please if you have any criticism let me know - I'm always looking to improve. :D
Vaingel
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The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 5/17/2018
Threads: 38
Posts: 1,514
Posted: 8/31/2020 at 8:30 AM
Post #284
Hey guys, I'm alive
And guess what?
I've been working on a story
But it's a throwaway fanfiction I care nothing about and not one of the things I should actually be working on
But here it is
My procrastination station
If you end up reading it
I hope you enjoy it
If you don't
I understand
Also, I haven't edited the final chapter
So there are probably a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes because my phone's autocorrect wants me to kill my fingers
So how are you guys?
Also, if you don't know how to move a story forward, is it a good time to do another rewrite?
Hiraeth
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Posted: 8/31/2020 at 10:04 AM
Post #285
Glad to know you're not dead! :P
When I'm stuck writing, usually I do something else entirely or write another story. If I don't know how to move it forward, I'll reread to hopefully catch what stagnated the plot in the first place. For me, rewrites are only reserved for critical reactor failure (i.e. I simply cannot). Rewrites aren't fun when you have to scrap 20K+ words. :/
My advice: don't rewrite unless necessary. Try to pinpoint your issue and take it from there! :)
Vaingel
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Posts: 1,514
Posted: 8/31/2020 at 10:09 AM
Post #286
Hmmm... that makes sense :3 thank you!
I'll be rereading then-- er, I mean, doing schoolwork *wink wonk*
Hopefully if one of the stories work out I'll be able to share it X3
Orcastration
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Joined: 11/1/2018
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Posted: 8/31/2020 at 10:17 AM
Post #287
cool
ill read later
Vaingel
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Posted: 8/31/2020 at 10:29 AM
Post #288
Thank
Also, that song your cousin made, the one on your profile, it's so cool @-@
Orcastration
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Posts: 33,448
Posted: 8/31/2020 at 11:08 AM
Post #289
Lol thx
Ne0nNy
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Joined: 7/13/2019
Threads: 92
Posts: 1,190
Posted: 9/1/2020 at 3:01 PM
Post #290
(Wow this is a lot of people to ping, sorry if I bothered you)
I'm currently working on a story I started about a week ago. Apparently I felt pretty motivated and wrote 24 pages in one day (I burned myself out, so I'm going to be continuing it now hopefully with a normal schedule). I'm looking for criticism and grammar corrections, since I'm sure I missed some.
This story is SFW. It contains no cuss words, religion references, nor any explicit scenes. Later on, there might be NSFW scenes, violence, and potentially cussing, but there is currently none.
The Transfer Student - Story (Google docs)
(Comments are enabled for spelling mistakes or grammatical errors so it is easier to pinpoint mistakes.)
Some things I might need to work on: Wider variety of word choice, explain appearances more in depth
Edited By Ne0nNy on 9/1/2020 at 3:02 PM.
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