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Marichoness
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The Fortuitous
Joined: 8/28/2019
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 3:31 PM
Post #191
I love the succulent idea! It's brilliant and I can imagine it becoming popular lol. I guess my suggestion would be to change what species you put the design on. If Drae isn't working, play around with different species until you find one you think is more suitable. Start with Rikki maybe?
The strawberry Luminary is gorgeous and I think you put the colors in the perfect spot to capture what your really going for. My only suggestion is maybe change the word luminary to a close and better known synonym. I had to google what Luminary meant and I feel like I'm not the only one.....
Ocean Blown Sands Vene I would suggest less grays. Quite a lot less grays and more sands the color of sunsets. More orangey yellows maybe?
Marichoness
Level 75
The Fortuitous
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 3:35 PM
Post #192
Key Lime Pie Luff, Love this! My only suggestion is to try and see if deeper browns would make it look better. I love the color pallet you used, it goes surprisingly well together!
Salty Sea Vuls, My suggestion would be to change the name. I'm not exactly seeing how the design fits with it in my mind. I love how the colors are nicely put together though, they match up very well!
Frothing Tide Quit, I agree, needs more of the tan. I'd also suggest you lessen the amount of white you used and input more blues.
Marichoness
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The Fortuitous
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 3:37 PM
Post #193
This probably won't help you decide which one to use, but here's my thoughts. The Starburst Aeri looks better than the other as a no vis, but the Ocean Burst looks better as a high vis....
Edited By Marichoness on 7/8/2020 at 3:37 PM.
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
Threads: 179
Posts: 7,362
Posted: 7/8/2020 at 3:38 PM
Post #194
Lol that helps, thanks :)
Ocean Burst looks dishwatery...
Larkian
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The Tactician
Joined: 5/15/2018
Threads: 104
Posts: 17,001
Posted: 7/8/2020 at 3:59 PM
Post #195
The Draeyl looks great, I think it could benefit from a few oranges in addition to the reds but it also looks nice the way it is.
The Luff is also awesome, although maybe consider adding more contrasts, and the greenish-blue looks a tad off, maybe add a few more of that color.
As for the Vene, I really like the concept! I think making some of the colors brighter or darker might help it a bit since it seems a bit faded.
Edited By Larkian on 7/8/2020 at 3:59 PM.
Larkian
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The Tactician
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 4:00 PM
Post #196
Thank you for the feedback!
I'm thinking of adding more blues to the Vuls since it seems a bit off and to maybe add some more 'sea' into it.
Yeah, it's been a pain with the Qit since the tan is only in one slot but it only seems to fit in that one slot haha.
Winterflower
Level 75
Maw-nster Masher
Joined: 2/25/2013
Threads: 32
Posts: 1,019
Posted: 7/8/2020 at 4:36 PM
Post #197
I was wondering what everyone thought about these designs that I'm planing to enter for the summer fest. They're only displayed as 3 vis.
Passion Fruit Griffi [I'm not sure how I feel about this one to be honest]
Aurora Waters Sylvorpa
Coral Cove Aurleon
Glowing waters Kelpari [I'm not really sure about the name]
I have some other ones as well but I feel like I already put a lot here.
Edited By Winterflower on 7/8/2020 at 4:45 PM.
Winterflower
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Maw-nster Masher
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 4:45 PM
Post #198
Rose Succulent Draeyl: I actually think this is really good, maybe make the eye colour a little darker? I'm not really sure about that but I think it makes it a little brighter.
Strawberry Luminary Luff: I really like this design and I would collect so many of them. I'm not sure about the Luminary part of then name though, it sounds good but I had to search up what it meant.
Oceanblown Sands Ny'vene: I don't really know about this, I'm not a ny'vene exepert but maybe make the colour 3 a little paler so it stands out more against the blue? Just a little.
Beaubuddyz
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 2/23/2020
Threads: 157
Posts: 8,664
Posted: 7/9/2020 at 3:25 PM
Post #199
Hi.
Well, that's just sad, Beau
Hello everyone! These are three designs for Summer Fest. I turst everyone here, but still, please don't steal my designs or anything. Anyways, here we go... I guess.
Middsummer's Dream Aeridini
(Is it weird that I just noticed that the Aeridini has arms that are tiny?)
No traits:
Three vis:
Six Vis
Blasts of Citris Bulbari
(I need so much help on this one...)
Three vis:
Six vis:
Mariana Trench Aurloen
(I really can't spell, lol. This is the 16th attempt)
No vis:
Three vis:
Six vis:
Rashomon
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 2/14/2020
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Posted: 7/9/2020 at 3:31 PM
Post #200
1. Love it a lot! But maybe change the name...sounds a bit like Midsummer Night's Dream :/
2. The color palette kinda blends together, making everything appear the same shade. Maybe put in some magenta or some brighter lime green, or white/cream as well to represent the white part of a citrus.
3. This is such a pretty design! I myself am really struggling with an idea for an Aurl design but you did it so well - I can't even - anyway. I can't find anything to criticize. :)
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