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Zolnixi
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Posted: 5/19/2021 at 3:01 PM
Post #11
Specklepaw's Decision
Specklepaw must make an important decision. Will she leave The Tribe or stay with them?
"Specklepaw!"
Raven was urging Specklepaw to wake up.
"Specklepaw." Echo growled.
"What is it?" Specklepaw asked.
"You must change your name. Or leave." Echo said.
"Oh don't be so mean!" Snow said. "Give her some time!"
"You have until dusk." Echo said.
"What's your decision?" Snow asked Specklepaw.
"It's sunhigh, not dusk." Specklepaw pointed out.
"Yes, it is. Do you want to go hunting?" Snow asked.
"No thanks." Specklepaw replied. "The Mountains aren't made for me."
"So your leaving."
"Maybe."
Dang... this is hard. I'll tell stories to the kits and see if they want to come. Specklepaw thought. Stories of BrightClan... of my mother...
"Hey! Wind, Rain and Screech!" Specklepaw said.
"Hey, it's Specklepaw!"
"The cat with the weird name!"
"She's cool! She's gonna tell us a story!"
"Yes I am!" Specklepaw replied.
"Yes!" Rain squealed. "What is it this time?"
"It's about where we came from...."
"Specklepaw, Specklepaw!"
"Dapplespirit! Oh no! I must have dozed off!" Specklepaw said.
"Specklepaw. You must return." Dapplespirit said.
"Why?" Specklepaw asked.
"The Clans are in serious danger." Dapplespirit replied.
"Danger? What kind of danger?"
"Rain and Leopard must find the 3rd to defeat the enemies that seems to sleep."
"So Specklepaw, are you leaving?" Echo asked.
"Yes." Specklepaw said. "I must."
"Farewell Specklepaw. Anyone want to go with her?"
"Me! I do!"
Screech was running towards her.
"I want to meet them!" Screech cheerfully said.
"Alright. Farewell Specklepaw. Farewell, Screech."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/20/2021 at 2:30 PM.
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Posted: 5/20/2021 at 10:09 AM
Post #12
The End of the Codebreakers
The Final Battle for the Codebreakers. Rainspirit and Speckleheart must find the 3rd in time to win the battle.
"Speckleheart, you seem ready to train an Apprentice. Screech, from this day until you receive your warrior name, you will be Foxpaw. Speckleheart, I wish you will pass everything you know onto him."
"I won't let you down, Squirrelstar, and BrightClan too." Speckleheart replied.
"Foxpaw! Foxpaw!"
"Speckleheart! Rainspirit! Everyone! They are attacking!"
Foxpaw was waking everyone up.
"It's them! NightClan!" Speckleheart growled.
"The forth Clan?" Foxpaw asked.
"No." Speckleheart replied.
"NightClan attack!"
"HiddenClan, help them!"
Owlthorn, Shadespot, Stormberry, Darkstorm and Waspnose leaped out of the bushes, scaring NightClan.
"No! The herbs!" Brightwhisker said.
"NightClan! You idiots!" Stormberry hissed.
"How come?" Mudface teased. "No supplies mean the Clan will die! FIGHT!"
"That was rough!" Owlthorn said.
"Yes, but how come Rainspirit and Speckheart barely got injured?" Stormberry asked.
"I don't know-" Squirrelstar started.
"I know why!" Brightwhisker said.
"Why?" Dovewhisker asked.
"Rain and Leopard must find the 3rd to defeat the enemies that seems to sleep."
"Huh?" Shadespot asked. "Makes no sense."
"It makes perfect sense!" Brightwhisker said. "Rainspirit and Speckleheart must find the 3rd. They are the Chosen Ones!"
"That's their camp!" Graystar said.
"Indeed it is." Jaystar said.
"Are we ready?" Stormberry asked.
"Alright, here we go!"
(left out the details of the battle)
"Frostflower, you have one final chance. Protect Jessie or fight him." Graystar growled.
"Your not strong! You lost a life!" Frostflower growled.
"Fight, Frostflower." Jessie hissed.
Frostflower seem surprised.
"Fight. Or I will kill you myself." Jessie hissed.
"Jessie!"
Jake came running towards Jessie.
"Oh, look who it is! Good old Jake!" Jessie sneered. "Do you want to be killed?"
"If I die I will join StarClan! You won't even join the Dark Forest!" Jake growled.
"Say that again!" Jessie hissed.
Jessie went and leaped for Jake. Jake, with this poor eyesight, managed to create a scar in Jessie's neck. However, after some time, they both die from their injuries.
"Here we mourn the cats that have died to this Cat. Here we mourn the Deputies of HiddenClan and BrightClan. Owlthorn and Ivyclaw. They served the Clan well, but they died to such cruel paws. And Jake, the one who had to kill his best friend to save us." Jaystar said. "Now, Graystar and Squirrelstar. Would you like to appoint new deputies?"
"Of course." They replied.
"Stormberry, you have served HiddenClan well for a long time, even helping with Goldenrose and Quitestream. Stormberry, even though sadly you lost an eye during the battle, you are deserving to become a Deputy." Graystar said.
"Speckleheart. Even though you recently became a Warrior, StarClan and I believe you are ready to become the Deputy. You are one of the Chosen Ones after all, and BrightClan thinks you are the one to make The Clans great again." Squirrelstar said.
"Are you sure about that, Squirrelstar?" Jaystar asked.
"I am." Squirrelstar replied. "She has a connection with StarClan."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/20/2021 at 1:24 PM.
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Posted: 5/20/2021 at 1:31 PM
Post #13
Foxpaw's Nightmares
After the Battle, Foxpaw has multiple Nightmares. What is the reason behind those?
"Dapplespirit! Please don't die!"
"Foxpaw?"
"What is it, Rainspirit?" Foxpaw asked.
"What is with you? Are you alright?" Rainspirit asked.
"I'm fine." Foxpaw replied. "I think."
"What are you dreaming about?"
"Dreams? I saw Dapplespirit die." Foxpaw said.
"Dapplespirit? It can't be. Today is a half-moon. I'll visit Moonpond and find Dapplespirit."
"Foxpaw, I saw Dapplespirit with my very own eyes. What do you mean?" Rainspirit asked.
"I saw her. I saw her...." Foxpaw said.
"Did you see other cats?" Rainspirit asked.
"Yes. A cat with a scared eye. His pelt was orange."
"That's... Darkblaze." Rainspirit said.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"
"Foxpaw! Can you be quiet? Blessfur and Birdfall's Kits are sleeping!"
"I saw them die!" Foxpaw squealed.
"Nonsense! Did you see your siblings die? Do you want to return to the Tribe?" Oshawa hissed.
"Silence, Oshawa. Your not the Deputy, and your NOT Squirrelstar!" Speckleheart hissed back.
"Foxpaw, what's have you been dreaming about?" Speckleheart asked.
"Dapplespirit dying." Foxpaw replied.
"Every night?" Speckleheart asked.
"Yes." Foxpaw said.
"Alright, let's go hunting. Try to forget the dreams please."
"Foxpaw."
"Dapplespirit, your alive!" Foxpaw cheerfully said.
"I always was." Dapplespirit responded. "I have something to tell you."
"What is it?" Foxpaw asked.
"Fox cannot stay with Rain and Leopard. Fox alone must leave to the place where Fire Rages."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/23/2021 at 10:37 AM.
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Posted: 5/20/2021 at 2:49 PM
Post #14
Battle of the Island
LightClan and BrightClan fight over a Island that runs between their territory. However, Russetfur from LightClan and Mistysong from BrightClan have other ideas.
"Jaystar! This is your last chance!" Squirrelstar hissed. "Let us have the island!"
"Never!" Jaystar hissed back. "We need it more than you!"
"Mistysong, when will this fighting end?" Russetfur asked.
"I don't know, Russetfur." Mistysong replied.
"There's too much bloodshed." Russetfur said.
"True. If only this could end...." Mistysong whispered.
"Mistysong, do you want to run away, just like Squirrelstar and Brightwhisker...."
"That's a great idea!" Mistysong cheerfully said.
"I can't. I father Sandfang's kits. They are named Redkit, Cherrykit and Blazekit." Russetfur responded.
"Oh." Mistysong said.
"It's about to be dawn." Russetfur said. "Let's meet again at moonhigh."
"Russetfur...."
"Hello there, Nectarscratch." Russetfur said.
"Where were you? Did you speak to her again?" Nectarscratch asked.
"No, Nectarscratch." Russetfur replied. "It's just..."
"What?" Nectarscratch asked.
"Nothing." Russetfur said. "I'm going hunting."
"Jaystar wants to see you." Nectarscratch said.
"Alright, BrightClan. We will leave our scent on the Island so LightClan won't touch it!" Squirrelstar ordered.
"Is this a good idea?" Foxpaw asked.
"Yes?" Mistysong said.
"There they are! LightClan!"
"Russetfur!"
"Mistysong!"
"What's going on?" Oshawa asked.
"This is a terrible idea!" Russetfur hissed.
"Russetfur, your a traitor!" Jaystar hissed back.
"No!" Mistysong hissed. "We have a better idea!"
"And what is that idea?" Squirrelstar asked.
"LightClan and BrightClan will share this island-" Russetfur said.
"No." Jaystar hissed.
"Listen to Russetfur and Mistysong. It might be a good idea." Squirrelstar said.
"Ah, Squirrelstar..." Jaystar teased.
"ahem. LightClan and BrightClan will share this island." Russetfur started.
"And why would that be a good idea?" Jaystar interrupted.
"It's a great idea!" Mistysong said. "Apprentices from both Clans can meet each other!"
"Seems like a good idea." Squirrelstar said.
"They could just meet at gatherings." Swiftbreath, the LightClan deputy, said.
"True." Speckleheart said. "But that happens once a moon."
"Good." Jaystar said.
"This fighting will end." Squirrelstar said. "From now on, this island will be called Lightbright Island."
"That was great!" Russetfur said.
"The moon, Lightbright island is beautiful..." Mistysong said.
"Let's try to meet every moonhigh here." Russetfur told Mistysong. "I love you."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/24/2021 at 3:16 PM.
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Posted: 5/21/2021 at 11:32 AM
Post #15
Echo's Wish
A Mountain Lion have been killing Echo's Cats. Only one can save them.
"I'm telling you, Echo, there's no hope!"
"Silence, Star." Echo hissed.
"Raven gotten a message from the Tribe of Endless Hunting." Star said.
"Raven?" Echo asked. "Why him?"
"He and Snow have a connection to StarClan." Star said. "That's why they aren't speaking to you."
"I'm here, Echo." Raven said. "Star isn't lying. I got a message from Night."
"What did she say?" Echo asked.
"Fox will arrive to the place where Fire Rages."
"Foxpaw."
"Dapplespirit! Am I dreaming?" Foxpaw asked.
"Yes, you are." Dapplespirit said. "You must go to this place."
"Where?" Foxpaw asked.
"Where your kin roam."
"So Foxpaw, you need to head to the Mountains?" Squirrelstar asked.
"Yes. Dapplespirit told me to." Foxpaw replied.
"May StarClan light your path." Squirrelstar said.
After some walking...
I'm finally here! Foxpaw thought.
"Why are you here?"
Foxpaw heard a patrol coming.
"Screech!" Star said.
"Why are you here?" Stream asked.
"Dapplespirit sent me here. And I'm called Foxpaw now" Foxpaw replied.
"Who?" Wing asked.
"StarClan." Foxpaw said.
"I'll bring you to Echo." Star said.
"Echo!"
Echo looked over.
"Why are you here?" Echo hissed.
"I'm the one to stop the chaos." Foxpaw said.
"No your not." Echo said. "Why would they send a traitor?"
"He's not a traitor!" Star growled. "He has the right to make decisions!"
"Alright, then." Echo said. "Star, your the one who will teach Screech everything he needs to know."
"I go as Foxpaw now." Foxpaw growled.
"Foxpaw! He's here!"
Foxpaw woke up. He saw a scary Mountain Lion. He was much bigger, and a big jaw! One bite, and Foxpaw was dead!
Foxpaw hissed at him. It didn't work.
Foxpaw suddenly got a good idea. He would just slash him. And he did. He was blinded, but not dead. Foxpaw ran outside. The Mountain Lion followed. Foxpaw jumped onto the tree. Suddenly, the tree falls. and the Mountain Lion is dead.
"Thank you Foxpaw. And great news! I'm expecting Wing's kits." Echo said.
"Congrats." Foxpaw said. "I'll be leaving."
"Who is she?"
"She's beautiful!"
"I think she is Dapplespirit!"
Foxpaw looked back. It was Dapplespirit!
"Dapplespirit!" Foxpaw cheerfully said.
"Greetings Foxpaw." Dapplespirit said.
"Greetings." Foxpaw said.
"I'm here to give you your Warrior Name. You did a great job."
"Really?' Foxpaw asked.
"Correct." Dapplespirit said. "Are you ready?"
"Yes I am!"
"I, Dapplespirit, watcher of BrightClan, call my ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as warriors in their turn. Foxpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"Yes." Foxpaw said.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Foxpaw, from this moment you will be known as Foxcliff. StarClan honors your bravery and compassion, and we welcome you as a full warrior of BrightClan!"
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/28/2021 at 8:24 PM.
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Posted: 5/21/2021 at 8:11 PM
Post #16
Blazepaw's Exile
Jaystar exiles Blazepaw, a young apprentice, for no good reason. However, that seems like a good thing for each cat....
"Russetfur. I know you have been visiting Mistysong. That was not the intention of Lightbright Island."
"I know, Jaystar." Russetfur said.
"Do you know what I'm going to do?" Jaystar growled. "I'll exile you."
"Alright." Russetfur.
"Nevermind." Jaystar said. "Not you."
"Who are you going to exile?" Swiftbreath asked.
"Blazepaw. I know you love her, Russetfur. We were friends as kits. I will never exile you."
"But..." Russetfur started.
"No buts." Jaystar hissed. "
"Leave now." Swiftbreath hissed at Blazepaw. "You should learn. We don't need you here."
Why did they want to exile me? Blazepaw thought. I'm only 8 moons old!
A squirrel jumped out of the bush.
A squirrel! Wonder if I can catch it. For the Clan...
Clan...
Clan... Not for the Clan! For myself! Blazepaw thought. I'm alone. All the good prey is in Clan Territory. I can't let another cat see me. Or I'm crow-food.
Blazepaw did a big leap, hoping to catch the squirrel. She caught it!
Blazepaw watches the moon as it becomes moonhigh. She is about to sleep when, it's raining.
Oh. she thought. I'll head into these tunnels. Hopefully nobody will notice...
This is cool! Blazepaw thought. Wait....
She could see a cat ahead.
Suddenly, she heard water coming her way. The tunnels were flooding!
Blazepaw attempted to swim. She succeed! She was able to swim!
But the water was rising. She could only wish StarClan was waiting for her...
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/25/2021 at 11:18 AM.
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Posted: 5/24/2021 at 3:19 PM
Post #17
Broken Den's Tunnels
After Blazepaw's Exile, Blazepaw has been living in Broken Den's Tunnels. But there is a dark secret behind them....
It's another day. At least, Broken Den think it is. He doesn't know it's it day or night.
Broken Den greets Nightclaw.
"Hello there, Nightclaw."
"Hello, Broken Den." Nightclaw responded.
"Please tell me! How many moons has it been? When will Dawn Day return?" Broken Den asked. "When will she come find me?"
"Broken Den." Nightclaw whispered.
Broken Den looked surpised.
"I'll answer your question with this. Come." Nightclaw said.
Broken Den followed Nightclaw. What he saw, was shocking. Blazepaw was laying there, unconscious.
"Who is this young cat?" Broken Den asked. "And why is she here?"
"I don't know." Nightclaw said. "What I do know is, where she is from. She needs to be treated immediately."
"No!" Broken Den hissed. "I promised Tree Root I would pass my Softpaw assessment and become a Sharpclaw!"
"Fine." Nightclaw said. "I'll treat her myself."
Blazepaw woke up to the scent of 2 strange cats.
"Where am I? Who are you?" Blazepaw asked.
"Blazepaw." Nightclaw said. "I'm Nightclaw. Your from LightClan, aren't you?"
"Nightclaw?" Blazepaw asked. "But your dead! And who is this cat?"
"He is Broken Den." Nightclaw replied. "He's a spirit. Trapped in these tunnels."
"Tunnels?" Blazepaw asked.
"Indeed." Broken Den said. "You can't leave, you must survive here."
"Can't I go outside and hunt?" Blazepaw asked.
"Your exiled." Nightclaw said. "They can't know, your here. They can't know, I'm alive."
"Alright then." Blazepaw said. "How do I hunt in these tunnels?"
"Broken Den, tell me about your family." Nightclaw said. "Blazepaw would like to know."
"Alright young one." Broken Den said. "I was born to Tree Root and Dawn Sky. They were lovely!
But there was something wrong, The Softpaw assessment. I died. And so did Dusk Day and Thunder Heart. We were Tree Root and Dawn Sky's only kits. And we died because of a mouse-brain test. Dusk Day and Thunder Heart are probably with my mother and father, somewhere. I'm alone in these tunnels, until Nightclaw, and you Blazepaw, came."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/25/2021 at 1:32 PM.
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Posted: 5/24/2021 at 3:32 PM
Post #18
Nightclaw's Return
Why did Nightclaw leave the Clans for so many moons?
"Blazepaw."
"What is it, Nightclaw?" Blazepaw asked.
"This is very important." Nightclaw responded.
"Will you join NightClan with me?"
"NightClan?" Blazepaw said, surprisingly.
"Yes, NightClan. Do you have a problem with it?" Nightclaw asked.
"Yes." Blazepaw answered. "NightClan was an evil Clan."
"That's what you think." Nightclaw said. "The truth is..."
"What?" Blazepaw asked.
"Jessie and Frank forcibly took over NightClan. Thanks to them, my friends are gone." Nightclaw said, sadly.
"Oh." Blazepaw said. "I'll be glad to join new NightClan!"
"Fantastic!" Nightclaw said.
"Here we are!" Nightclaw said.
"Who are these cats?" Blazepaw asked.
"My other friends. NightClan was a big Clan."
"Wow!" Blazepaw said. "Wait-'
Blazepaw and Nightclaw heard a cat coming their way.
"Broken Den?"
"Yes, Nightclaw. Blazepaw." Broken Den replied.
"What are you doing here?" Nightclaw asked.
"You helped me in the tunnels. I shall help this NightClan by watching over it."
"Blazepaw." Nightclaw said. "It's time for you to become a Warrior. Are you ready?"
"I am." Blazepaw said.
"I, Nightclaw, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. She has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend her to you as a warrior in her turn. Blazepaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do." Blazepaw said.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Blazepaw, from this moment you will be known as Blazedusk. StarClan honors your courage and loyalty, and we welcome you as a full warrior of NightClan."
Edited By Zolnixi on 5/28/2021 at 8:20 AM.
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Posted: 5/24/2021 at 3:35 PM
Post #19
Dapplespirit's Promise
Why is Dapplespirit the only StarClan cat to appear as a Spirit and help the Clans?
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Posted: 6/11/2021 at 8:14 PM
Post #20
hi! i like ur version of warrior cats, the only thing that pains me is that its got a really similar storyline to warriors. lightbright = sunning rocks, etc. but, continue! delete this if you dont like it, why not?
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