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Imorphemi
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Posted: 8/10/2019 at 7:41 AM
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So i got this idea to make a trait based on Harmonia's Necklace, because, why not, so this is it
But for some reason it feels odd or weird to me, like theres too much or something or something's missing...so i need some ideas
(also those glyphs are harmony, bad, and protection)
Superocelot02
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Posted: 8/10/2019 at 12:33 PM
Post #2
Maybe another trait to go with it would make it feel less odd? I think it looks lovely.
Imorphemi
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Posted: 8/10/2019 at 4:49 PM
Post #3
Its part of a set which I'm already happy with the final ones except for this one (which is ironic because i started on this one first)
This is the whole thing
Superocelot02
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Posted: 8/10/2019 at 9:59 PM
Post #4
It looks really nice! Maybe a braclet on the tail or around the neck, like the ones around the back legs, would be what you think is missing.
Silverkitsu
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Posted: 8/14/2019 at 5:09 AM
Post #5
The set is really pretty.
I think the problem with the necklace could either be that the purple around the glyphs is a bit much, or that the necklace itself is really inconspicuous. Maybe you could try dialing the purple mist back a little and making the pendant a bit bigger?
Hope this is helpful, I've never really tried designing traits myself, just throwing out some ideas.
Imorphemi
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Posted: 8/14/2019 at 6:33 AM
Post #6
Hmm...
Hows this look then?
Silverkitsu
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Posted: 8/14/2019 at 4:03 PM
Post #7
I think that looks really good. The pendant could maybe sit a bit more on the chest rather than between the legs.
Can I ask what the runes are from? They look very cool
Imorphemi
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Posted: 8/14/2019 at 4:49 PM
Post #8
The squiggly lines are from the Ny'vene's chaos runes, and the glyphs (which i just searched up) symbolize harmony, bad, and protection.
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