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Laurnrabbit
Level 23
Joined: 7/19/2018
Threads: 11
Posts: 218
Posted: 8/17/2018 at 12:30 PM
Post #71
Name: Yanna
Gender: Female
Age: 5 months
Rank: Pup
Desired rank: Warrior,lead Hunter, alpha female
Appearance:
(Changed to look more like parents)
Personality: Playful and very curious, often is exploring new areas Wich sometimes leads to trouble. Enjoys chasing rabbits, playing and being in charge Wich leads to occasionally being bossy. Has high self esteem, likes to stay close to her mother and running around. Likes to swim and try to catch fish. Attracted to shiny objects and collects them. Loves the taste of wild pigs.
Backstory: Born and currently being raised in the pack by ocean and akila (hope that's right) and has no intentions of leaving. Wants to one day be alpha female of the pack or atleast lead Hunter. Likes fighting/playing with the other pups and constantly chasing them around. Was born in spring. Trains to become a warrior all the time. Friends with the other pups.
Crush/mate: None.
Skills: Is pretty strong and has great eyesight
Other: She has fluffy fur and likes Elk.
Edited By Laurnrabbit on 8/20/2018 at 1:22 PM.
MistressNyx
Level 75
The Eggstraordinaire
Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/17/2018 at 1:02 PM
Post #72
Declined. For one, go read the rules. Two, use proper grammar, like capitalizing her name. Finally, use full sentences on her Backstory and Personality, and make sure they each have 6+ sentences.
Dragonsrcool54
Level 56
The Perfectionist
Joined: 5/7/2018
Threads: 75
Posts: 65,378
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 7:51 AM
Post #73
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sorry I'm not good enough for u (i dont want to be mean just upset cuz i really wanted to do this. then again I'm not very good with RPs with lots of rules, especially grammar. I come here to get away from school problems and family problems, not face them again! hope u can at least inv me to other RPs u make in the future that u think that i can handle.)
(also google mountain loin. its a real thing)
Edited By Dragonsrcool54 on 8/20/2018 at 5:44 AM.
MistressNyx
Level 75
The Eggstraordinaire
Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 11:18 AM
Post #74
No way. It is practically imposible for him to have taken down an elk single. It is tufficult for even a group to successfully catch one. Also, His favorite food is mountain goat, because that's what he catches the most. No. It is highly unrealistic for him to catch mountain goats all the time. Finally, battling a mountion "loin" (what's a mountain loin? Never heard of them) at age 3 and winning? No, just no. Your character is highly dangerous, illogical, and just flat-out OP. Change all that, and I will put him in as Omega, since he came from an entierly different pack. Also, use proper grammar. There are tons of errors, not capitalizing the start of sentences being one of many.
MistressNyx
Level 75
The Eggstraordinaire
Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 11:20 AM
Post #75
Please fix the broken picture. Accepted.
MistressNyx
Level 75
The Eggstraordinaire
Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 12:54 PM
Post #76
Queenie and Laurnrabbit -
Is it okay with both of you if Yanna is Akali's pup? (forgive me if I spelled that wrong, Queenie).
Queenie
Level 69
The Perfectionist
Joined: 8/17/2014
Threads: 26
Posts: 1,896
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 1:00 PM
Post #77
Sure but Akali hasn't had any pups or mates yet so either I can edit it so that she has pups and a mate or Akali could have adopted Yanna from another littler that didn't want her.
Shayni
Level 63
Trickster
Joined: 6/2/2017
Threads: 164
Posts: 13,771
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 4:19 PM
Post #78
Can you add Aspen to the list please? Thank you ^. ^
MistressNyx
Level 75
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Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 5:11 PM
Post #79
Maybe ask Ocean? He and Akali.seem like they would get along well.
MistressNyx
Level 75
The Eggstraordinaire
Joined: 1/19/2018
Threads: 121
Posts: 2,487
Posted: 8/19/2018 at 5:13 PM
Post #80
Oops, I thought I had. Next time I forget something like that, yell at me, please? I'll go add her.
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