That looks great!!! Maybe make the lines more distinct and add some mist for a ghostly effect but it looks awesome ^w^

I went for a more echo-y glow rather than the standard lunemara cloud of exploding dust...or did you mean a winding mist, like Swirling Snowflakes or Spring Blossoms? We could try a cloud...that might be interesting...

Redoing the lines is an excellent idea...that I will do tomorrow.
Do you feel that the double swallowtail needs work?
Oh, and just for fun, Ghostly Wings (Haunting Wings might be better) with a sort of plasma-watery version of Glow Dust. Ectoplasmine, the companion M2 for this bizarre set.

Ohh yess deffinantly looks more ghostly with the extra bubbly mist but I like the double swallow tails it gives it extra dimension

*this took far too long* Re-lined and darker, here you go! Shading's still kind of iffy, but this is why I'm not actually an artist...

Gorgeous! The wings are, as you said, more of a fade in, and it's stunning. The wings are wonderful in themselves, and the soft edges and inner lining only add to the experience. Someone noted the wing tails and I agree, they absolutely do add dimension to it and give it a more complete look. The wavy wing shape itself is is a nice contrast to the lune's fluff, adding onto the echo-y feel of it. The distinct lines give it substance, and overall I'd say it's a wonderful trait, and lunes need more soft traits like this :>

That looks so good!!!!! I really hope it gets picked for spring fest