*pokes you*

I've been really busy but after school I will start on my story and pick my song.

Ok mom :P

Song: Without You by: Avicii


Story: Without You

One day a girl around 21 named Maxine was walking with her boyfriend Jonathon, they were walking through a park late at night, they were chatting with hot coffee's. A man came out of nowhere and stabbed Jonathon, "Jon!" Maxine screamed in terror. Maxine woke up gasping, "Jon." she said as she began crying, "Why, why did it have to be you?!" she cried in agony. The day Jonathon had died had been 5 years ago, Maxine was now 26 and had a daughter named Jasmine, Jasmine came into her mother's room, "Mommy?" she asked sleepily rubbing at her eye, Jasmine was only 5 years old and had never met her father, Maxine looked at her daughter, she looked so much like Jon, "It's ok baby, it was just a bad dream." she said wiping away her tears, Jasmine climbed up onto the bed, "Mommy, what was daddy like?" the two curled up on the bed, "Your daddy was just like you, kind, sweet, and a handsome, brave man." Jasmine hugged her mother, "I wish I had met him." she said laying her head on the pillow. Maxine lay down as well, "If only you could've met him." she said softly. The next day Maxine made chocolate pancakes and bacon after Maxine dropped off Jasmine at school she came back to the house and took a nap, "Jon, I have something to tell you." Maxine said to Jon, Jon had his arm around his wife, "I'm pregnant." Jon stopped walking, "A-are you sure?" he asked, Maxine nodded, "Yes, I'm having a girl." Jon let out a cry of pure joy. Maxine smiled, the two hugged and kissed, "What will we name her?" Maxine smiled, "I was thinking Jasmine." Jon nodded, "It's perfect." he said kissing her on the cheek, the two had been so happy, but then when that man had come, a part of Max had died with Jon, but then the ghost of her husband said, "Even though I'm gone, please take care of our daughter, she may not have a dad, but she has a wonderful mother." Max woke up from her dream, but instead of the usual sadness that came with the thought of Jon being gone, she felt like a weight had been lifted, "Thank you Jon." she whispered softly as tears fell. As soon as Maxine had brought Jasmine home, she told her daughter everything she knew about her late father.

The End

E17

My story is done, here's the link to the song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WRz2MxhAdJo

So I'm going to call it good enough. I could probably build it more but this is good enough.

I chose "Far From Home" by Five Finger Death Punch

Here is the story and here's a little cheat sheet that puts all the song titles I added throughout in bold. 19 in all using songs from Bad Wolves, Breaking Benjamin, Disturbed, Metallica, and Five Finger Death Punch. See how many you can get :3 I wasn't able to use all of the song titles as they are so some have had pronouns or tenses changed.

Enjoy~

I'll get to the judging on my next day off for work, in meantime, hold on tight

Sorry for the wait everyone,

after reading both your stories through and deciding, I will now announce the winner.

@Hundenelsker

Prize:

-100 Diamonds
-200k gold
-Breeding from 2 pairs of any pet I own.


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@Eevee17:

You will still be getting something:

-50k gold.

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Please set up CoD to me to pick up your prizes please.

Um, I don't know how to set up CoD.

*blink blink* tiny button under inventory that looks like a mail