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Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:18 PM
Post #1
Hello Peoples! Here's my book so far. I copy and pasted the whole thing, but after a bunch of editing I just decided to delete it all and past the link. That's what all the ignore this comments are.
WOW that took forever to copy and paste. Give me feedback!
Glitterthesylveon
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Posted: 9/14/2017 at 1:01 AM
Post #7
In the parts where they speak to one another it gets very confusing,
but overall the story has strong characters, a great plot, and an upbeat fantasy setting.
To adjust the areas where the talking starts to blend in with the descriptive text and the character's POV you can add " " to the speech.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/14/2017 at 7:56 PM
Post #8
I copied and pasted from my google docs, so it might've deleted those.
