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Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:18 PM Post #1
Hello Peoples! Here's my book so far. I copy and pasted the whole thing, but after a bunch of editing I just decided to delete it all and past the link. That's what all the ignore this comments are.
Edited By Fengarii on 11/14/2017 at 9:08 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:21 PM Post #2
Edited By Fengarii on 11/14/2017 at 9:06 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:24 PM Post #3
Ignore this
Edited By Fengarii on 11/14/2017 at 9:07 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:25 PM Post #4
Ignore this
Edited By Fengarii on 11/14/2017 at 9:07 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:25 PM Post #5
Ignore this
Edited By Fengarii on 11/14/2017 at 9:07 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/13/2017 at 11:26 PM Post #6
WOW that took forever to copy and paste. Give me feedback!
Glitterthesylveon
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Posted: 9/14/2017 at 1:01 AM Post #7
In the parts where they speak to one another it gets very confusing,
but overall the story has strong characters, a great plot, and an upbeat fantasy setting.

To adjust the areas where the talking starts to blend in with the descriptive text and the character's POV you can add " " to the speech.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/14/2017 at 7:56 PM Post #8
I copied and pasted from my google docs, so it might've deleted those.

Sorry about that
Edited By Fengarii on 9/16/2017 at 3:24 PM.
Fengarii
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Posted: 9/16/2017 at 3:24 PM Post #9
Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=51162&page=1#8
Author: Fengarii
Time Posted: 9/14/2017 at 7:56 PM
I copied and pasted from my google docs, so it might've deleted those.

Sorry about that
Glitterthesylveon
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Posted: 9/16/2017 at 7:30 PM Post #10
It's alright!
:3
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