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Xenios
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The Tender
Joined: 8/3/2016
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Posted: 10/24/2017 at 7:25 PM
Post #111
thanks!
ooh, what do you like about it?
Grapejuice
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/8/2016
Threads: 155
Posts: 22,899
Posted: 10/24/2017 at 7:54 PM
Post #112
np! and I like how you took some things that people normally enjoy and found a sadder turn to it, it's very beautiful.
Grapejuice
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/8/2016
Threads: 155
Posts: 22,899
Posted: 10/24/2017 at 8:03 PM
Post #113
They say I need to laugh and I smile
but inside I'm crying.
Think I'm okay,
but inside I'm dying.
They say I'm doing fine,
but I feel like they're lying.
Know who you are,
but what if i'm lost?
Me, It's what you are,
but at what cost?
Edited By Grapejuice on 10/24/2017 at 8:05 PM.
Xenios
Level 68
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Threads: 114
Posts: 2,151
Posted: 10/24/2017 at 8:19 PM
Post #114
lol XD i was just being depressing XD lol I'm glad you liked it!
Xenios
Level 68
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Joined: 8/3/2016
Threads: 114
Posts: 2,151
Posted: 10/24/2017 at 8:20 PM
Post #115
beautiful!!!
Grapejuice
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/8/2016
Threads: 155
Posts: 22,899
Posted: 10/24/2017 at 8:24 PM
Post #116
thanks Magyak ^^ Just realized I accidentally pinged you but meh
Grapejuice
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/8/2016
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Posts: 22,899
Posted: 11/1/2017 at 3:01 AM
Post #117
Okay The contest is over and I finally finished judging. I must admit it was a hard choice for the free verse!
Finally the winners are
Free Verse
Okay so we have to winners for the free verse and they are Magyak101 and Shayni! Send Shardial a CoD for 10k and your lupora's are waiting to be picked up!
Sonnet Winner
Emberfall777 Congratz! send Shardial a CoD for 10k and Your two lupora's are waiting to be picked up!
Onomatopoeia Winner
Nafariaandulin congratz! send Shardial a CoD for 10k and your two lupora's are waiting to be picked up!
An rat in a cage
Claws to get out,
Scratching and burning and turning about,
It wants to be free,
To reach its destination
And so my heart burns with the same desperation.
A bird with clipped wings
Sings for its sorrow
Defenseless, it likely wont be there tomorrow
It longs for the sky
And the sun and the moon
Just how my heart sings a heartbreaking tune.
Grapejuice
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 1/8/2016
Threads: 155
Posts: 22,899
Posted: 11/1/2017 at 5:10 PM
Post #120
aw what a heartbreaking poem. it's really Good Magyak! Added it to your archive ^^ also congratz! Your the first person in this group to have filled up an entire posts worth of poems.
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