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Fox
Level 75
Master Sylestiologist
Joined: 3/10/2014
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Posted: 10/18/2015 at 7:27 PM
Post #1
Entries are being judged.
This is a contest for Typhlosion's Battle Dome.
In a small area of the coliseum sits a ny'vene atop a white pillar.
She looks slightly irritated by the ny'vene beside her, presumably her son. At first you are reluctant to approach the ny'venes, but eventually you do. Her demeanor changes instantly and she greets you with a warm smile, "Welcome to the Battle Dome, adventurer! My name is Maakrindah Hil Jud, the cinnamon heart queen! You can call me Maakrindah for short. May I ask a favour of you?" Before you have the chance to politely decline she wraps her tail around you and explains, "My son here can not obtain his name while he looks this way. Please, give him a makeover using these dyes." Her left wing awkwardly points to a basket of pet dyes beside her. Not wanting to refuse the ny'vene, you get to work.
The ny'vene to be dyed:
Rules:
- Follow standard Battle Dome rules.
- Role playing encouraged.
- You have 1 entry.
- You can not change the ny'vene's genes/mutations.
Prize: 3V 1C Solar Eclipse Ny'vene
Judging:
- You start with 10 points.
- For every colour changed your points are reduced by 1.
- Role playing earns you 2 points.
- A pleasing design earns you 5 points.
- The winner is determined by number of points + aesthetics.
Earning BP [Battle Dome]:
- A moderator/Typhlosion will grant Battle Points when you role play!
- BP is the Battle Dome's currency to buy extra prizes.
- Earn more BP by giving feedback to others in the style of a role play.
- Interact with Maakrindah for BP!
- BP can be given for integrating role play within your entry.
This contest ends Sunday, October 25 @ 11:59PM Sylestia time.
Edited By on 10/26/2015 at 1:21 AM.
FallForever
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 2/22/2014
Threads: 7
Posts: 586
Posted: 10/18/2015 at 8:57 PM
Post #2
Before setting of on her work, the Zolnixi gently sets down the basket of dyes and turns towards Maakrindah. "Um, I have just one question... Do you mind how your son's colors are changed?" Aquilina's ears slightly flatten, hoping she hadn't offended the Ny'vene.
Fox
Level 75
Master Sylestiologist
Joined: 3/10/2014
Threads: 398
Posts: 11,722
Posted: 10/18/2015 at 10:45 PM
Post #3
Maakrindah's webbed ears twitched as she heard the voice of a perhaps shy zolnixi. Her great head turns and she stares at the beautiful blue zolnixi with a blank expression on her face. It seemed she was confused about the question at first. After a few moments of contemplation she replied, "Ah, well my son has expressed to me that he would prefer a different colouration than my own. He dislikes the beautiful desaturated maroon of his mother..." The ny'vene's teeth flash in a grimace, obviously displeased with her son's wishes and with the zolnixi for reminding her. "He said something about darker colours and vibrant wings." She waved her wings as if to say, "Be gone with you."
(Colours do not matter much, I'm pretty open to unique combinations as long as there is some contrast.)
FallForever
Level 60
Candy Dispenser
Joined: 2/22/2014
Threads: 7
Posts: 586
Posted: 10/18/2015 at 11:38 PM
Post #4
Aquilina's ears quickly perk up after she hears the reply, almost stuttering with her words. "Ah! Thanks you. I'll be one my way." And with that, she picked up the basket with her jaw and scurried away.
(Next reply will probably be my entry, unless I have any more question.)
FallForever
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Candy Dispenser
Joined: 2/22/2014
Threads: 7
Posts: 586
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 12:02 AM
Post #5
The blue Zolnixi made her way up the the white pillar with what seemed to be a notebook clamped in her jaws and the basket of pet dyes being carried with her tail, none of which seem to be used. Aquilina sets down the notebook and basket before shyly addressing the Ny'vene.
"Um, I sketched out a design so that the actual dyes wouldn't have to be used... Saving resources! I... I hope you don't mind!" The Zolnixi's soft voice trailed off as she held up the notebook to an open page, showing a detailed sketch of Maakrindah's son, only with different colors.
(Only color that didn't change was Color 1)
Also, sorry if I post too much, I just make up designs rather quickly
Rabbitaka
Level 63
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 12/9/2014
Threads: 71
Posts: 3,995
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 8:52 AM
Post #6
Under Maakrindah's watchful eye, I splodging paint all over the place, designing her son a new identity. Trying to keep him as true to himself as possible, minimal changes were made for maximum results. Though that was challenging at times. Sweat beads drip down the side of my face as i busily work. Occasionally, Maakrindah walks over and sweeps her wings over my forhead and uses them to fan away the heat. As the sun was setting, my creation was complete and under the sky made of peach melba and sprinkles, i hold out the result of my days hardwork to Maakrindah. She runs her eyes over every detail and........
Let's hope it's a happy ending XD Anyways, i'm not a great role player.
GhostlyFours
Level 60
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/28/2015
Threads: 61
Posts: 3,710
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 12:07 PM
Post #7
After I signed up for the paintball game, I decided to walk around, as I had nothing better to do. I round a corner a notice a fierce looking Ny'Vene in a corner, her tail wrapped around a smaller version of her. I smile and walk up to the Ny'Vene, feeling brave and bold. I look around before I speak and see a basket full of pet dyes, "I see someone is wanting to be dyed, yes? Well, who shall it be?" I look at the smaller Ny'Vene, who seems a little disgusted with himself, "Is it you, young one?"
Fox
Level 75
Master Sylestiologist
Joined: 3/10/2014
Threads: 398
Posts: 11,722
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 12:13 PM
Post #8
The ny'vene looks to his mother, then to the stranger and back to his mother again. The older ny'vene's face is somewhat annoyed but she gives him a slight nod. He turns to face the lupora and says, "Yes, I am displeased with my colouring and wish to change it before I am given my name." He looks nervous for a second before saying, "I would prefer darker scales and more vibrant wings."
Fox
Level 75
Master Sylestiologist
Joined: 3/10/2014
Threads: 398
Posts: 11,722
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 12:14 PM
Post #9
(Hi, Typhlosion! There have been some role players involved here. Just letting you know so you can give BP or assign a moderator/admin to this thread.)
Edited By on 10/19/2015 at 12:15 PM.
GhostlyFours
Level 60
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/28/2015
Threads: 61
Posts: 3,710
Posted: 10/19/2015 at 2:03 PM
Post #10
"I see," I circle around him, making notes in my head for an idea, I go to the basket and pick out four of the dyes. I then begin to work on him, smudging some color here and there, the flames on him harder to work with, but I manage it some how. I take a step back and look at his mother, hoping she doesn't look too dissatisfied. "I will be right back," I go to the nearest booth and ask if I could borrow a mirror, I come back, mirror being held by my mouth when I give it to the young Ny'Vene. "How's this?" I ask when he takes it, looking at his reflection for a few moments.
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