So sense Im a nooby to this game,and I LOVE Halloween, Im gunna be making a story contest!Im not the beast at making threads so if I made a mistake,please let me know :)
RULES
1.You MUST be nice and kind to everyone!
2.Your story MUST be scary or creepy(or Halloween related)
3.Please include pictures of your characters!
4.At the end of your story it MUST say,"Happy Halloween"
5.Enjoy making your story and have fun reading other stories!
The Contest will END on November 1^st(Please do not post a story If the contest is over)
PRIZES
1st place prize will be getting a choice of these 4 pets
They will also get an offspring from my new Zolnixi's Beauty and Flame
2nd place will choose from these

And 3rd place will choose from these 2

MY STORY

One dark Halloween,A Zolnixi, Her mate,and her 3 pupsWhere walking down the street to go to the next humans house when suddenly the sylesti catcher van came rushing up the street.They saw a human sticking out of the window with a net.The Zolnixi told her pups to hide behind her so they wouldnt get separated from each other,but as soon as they hid behind her,the human came snatched one of her pups by the neck and put the poor little sylesti in a cage.The mother bit the man on his leg tugging him down to the floor.When the man hit the floor with a BUMP,he dropped the cage and it opened."Hurray,"cried one of the Zolnixi's pups."Our little sister is safe once at last!"As fast as they could,they went running down to their den.They all reached their den safe but they where not the only ones there.A crying pup had found there den.The Zolnixi's mate asked the pup what was wrong.The pup replied,"The sylesti catchers killed my mother and my father!"What a horrible thing!"said the Zolnixi's mate.We will take care of you said the Zolnixi.When the Zolnixi's where sleeping the crying pup and the Zolnixi's pup where still awake.The pup said,"How did you get here?"and the not crying anymore pup said with a smile,"the dog catchers"and as soon as she said that 2 men walked over and 1 man picked up the not crying anymore pup and said,"Good Girl Goobie"while the other came into the den and put all the Zolnixi's in a cage.The End!
Happy Halloween!PLEASE CHOOSE YOUR PRIZES(IF YOU WIN) AS FAST AS POSSIBLE BECAUSE IF YOU ARE LAST TO PICK YOU GET TO CHOOSE FROM THE ONLY 2 LEFT(PLEASE THANK KOOKIECATCHER AND MILKYWAYXD FOR DONATING THE PET)

The Legend of the Lost Ones

On a cold day in Fall a pup popped her head out of a den. She was chasing a butterfly into the Dark woods.
Soon it grew dark and she realized she was lost. All of a sudden a voice cried out " Come play with me ". So entranced by the voice she called out " Where are you ". It said " Follow me ". So she listened to the voice and came upon a lake surrounded by trees. A full moon shone down upon it. There she saw the pup. He called out " You came. " in an ominous voice. A moment passed. Then he turned and said " Now you have to play with me......... Forever. It is said you can hear their voices calling out " Come play with us". And every pup that enters that forest or hears the voices passing by disappear, never to be seen again.
HAPPY HALLOWEEN

The girl pup.


The boy pup.

What are the prizes...? I don't see any listed, but you do say contest.

Ah yes I forgot to post them,I'll edit the post right now ^.^

Something Wicked This Way Follows

A daring, but very inexperienced, griffi named Black Black was on his way home from getting a nice spa treatment. It was autumn and the leaves crinkled under his clean paws. Tsk! he snorted as bits of leaves and twigs got tangled in his paw fur. It was late afternoon but the normal forest path he normally trod was darker than normal. Black Black looked to the sky; no moon and any early stars were obscured by wisps of dark cloud. He shuddered, for a chill breeze had just stirred around him. A little uneasy, he decided to trot. Clip-clop, clip-clop. His hooves hit the hard dirt with a reassuring and soothing rhythm. Clip-clop, clip-clop, he continued, being lulled by his own hoofbeat. Clip-clop, clip-clop, CRACK! Black Black whirred around, heart pounding, afraid of what he might find. He saw only trees and bushes, painted orange from the setting sun. It had sounded like something big broke a very large stick or a small tree. Who, or.. what.. could have made that noise? No longer caring about his paw fur and the leaves, Black Black took off down the path as fast as he could, beating his wings for extra speed. Clip-clop! Clip-clop! Whoosh! Clip-clop! Clip-clop! Whoosh! After a while, he slowed down, very tired and feeling a little silly. He had not heard any other sounds and it must have just been a tree falling. Black Black shook his head at his previous fears. With a sigh, he looked at his paws, dirty from running so hard. What a waste of a day!

CRACK!

Black Black let out a shrill screech, unintentionally. He was so tired but he began running again, as fast as he could, towards his home. Unlike last time, the cracking, breaking noise followed him in the woods next to him. Just over the hill and past a small bridge sat his house, which was donned with glowing jack-o-lanterns. He could see it in the distance as he made his way up the hill, panting heavily. The pumpkins flickered softly, inviting him home to safety. He wanted to catch his breath but the cracking noise was right behind him. His hooves thundered over the old wooden bridge as he ran up to his home's walkway. It was just then, as he reached his porch, that he realized the cracking, and whatever was causing it, had stopped. He looked back towards the bridge and the forest. It was dark now and the only light was the warm light of his house and the pale yellow-orange of the harvest moon rising over the trees. The water of the stream twinkled and winked at him in the moonlight, and the trees sighed softly. But in the distance, far, far away, he heard a "Crack!" and a whinny of something in the dark.

Happy Halloween!

Please meet Black Black, the star of the story!

Isn't he just adorable?