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Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 12:24 PM Post #71
Thank you for the long post, I appreciate it ^^

I'll add you to the pinglists, thanks again/
LemonSoul
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The Sweet Tooth
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Posted: 11/20/2020 at 3:40 PM Post #72
Pinging myself to message you art stuff when I have the chance!
Whiterosealliance
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 2:39 PM Post #73
gah, I'm so late-

I would like to be on the main and critique pinglist, please!


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Song Name:
Reminiscence

Overall Rating (1-10):
8

What emotions did the song give you?:
Happiness

What did you think of when listening to the song?:
It's a light, happy, and simple song.
For some reason, the guitar melody(?) sounds like something that would be played during a happy little scene in a medieval setting. I personally think that should be changed considering the setting, but that's just my opinion.

Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?:
Nope.

Other:
Did you see Lark's critique on this? Because I didn't see you acknowledge it, and I'm double checking to make sure.
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 2:43 PM Post #74
I did see it, I forgot to acknowledge it. Thanks for reminding me ^^

Thanks for your critique! I get the medieval thing, do you have an idea of what to change it too? Piano or a low violin perchance?
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 2:45 PM Post #75
Apologies for the late reply. I really appreciate your feedback, and I didn't mean to forget.

I won't have a kill/save choice, I dislike those as well. The leitmotif of this theme is going to be used a lot, or at least I'll try to use it often ^^
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 2:58 PM Post #76
Artist Ping

First only-artist ping ^^

One small preface before I begin. I will never expect people to do art for free. If I admire your artwork, I will commission you with Sylestian currency of whatever price you find appropriate.

That being said, this ping list will give out drawing prompts. If you don't want to draw it, you are not obligated to in any way. Currency is not guaranteed, though if your art is beautiful or I use it in the game, I will most definitely pay you.

The first prompt is:

Name: Lottie

Character Description: Inspired by the axolotl. Has three tendril things on each side of her head, with dark pink frills on the ends (see pictures of axolotls, hard to explain)

Color Hexes: Skin is FFE8E8. Frills are D66DAA.

Character Personality: Lighthearted/flippant, though has a serious streak. Likes to fix things and get her hands dirty. Short tempered if things aren't going great. She's a ISTP-A, for those who like MBTI types.

Clothing: Mechanic's clothes, though she often wears a casual sleeveless tee and baggy jeans. Likes to keep her tools close at hand, might wear a tool belt. Heavy-duty boots.

Frame Size (for pixel art): Hmm.... have some artistic freedom ^^;

Animations: None yet.

Edited By Sonrisa on 11/27/2020 at 2:59 PM.
Whiterosealliance
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 5:16 PM Post #77
Maybe low violin?
Sonrisa
Level 75
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 5:20 PM Post #78
Sweet - I'll try that. Thank you :)
Spireofbone
Level 67
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Posted: 11/27/2020 at 7:20 PM Post #79
I'll start on my example of her art soon! Does she wear clothing?
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/28/2020 at 9:01 AM Post #80
Yup ^^ It's in the clothing section of the commission.
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