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Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/18/2020 at 4:17 PM
Post #61
I don't have any fully colored images. I've got a couple sketches and some pretty detailed descriptions, if you can work with that.
Wistirio
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Posted: 11/18/2020 at 6:10 PM
Post #62
May I be added to main & artist ping list?
(I have some experience w/ pixel art, not sure about the animation part though...)
Auria
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Posted: 11/18/2020 at 6:51 PM
Post #63
Could I be added to all of them. I'm not sure if I can help with art, but if you need any character design ideas or anything I'd be glad to help!....I don't do pixel art though... If you can't use my help for the art then just add me to the Main and Critique please.
Sugarrxoxo
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 12:10 AM
Post #64
Sure, that'll do
Sugarrxoxo
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 12:10 AM
Post #65
Sorry- message repeated lol
Edited By Sugarrxoxo on 11/19/2020 at 12:11 AM.
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 7:44 AM
Post #66
I'd love your help with concept art, pixel art just happens to be the end result. Thank you ^^
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 7:45 AM
Post #67
Animation ends up being pretty simple, especially if it's just walking. I'd love your help with anything ^^
Tisquares
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 10:38 AM
Post #68
~ greetings ~
I would love to help out with this!
I have experience in music composition and pixel art, but I'm not exactly fast at either.
I am very lightly familiar with your program GMS2.
However, I have years of experience in storywriting - in fact, most of the things I've written are relevant to games I've made (a majority of psychological stuff). I enjoy writing fourth-wall breakers, so I'm more than willing to jump in!
As for puzzles/choices? Puzzles I've never really worked with, and choices are something I don't make often (both in real life and games).
TL;DR I can help out with music, art (both of which might not be timely), and storywriting. Programming I can give tips/assistance. Puzzles and choices, you're probably better without me there.
Sonrisa
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 10:52 AM
Post #69
Thanks ^^
I'd love it if you could read through the updates. There's only one at the moment, it's linked in the first post.
Latif
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Posted: 11/19/2020 at 11:53 AM
Post #70
I would like to be added as main and critique pings. Like I said in chat, my specialty is finding and filling in plotholes for stories. I very much like what I have read so far, and I would like to contribute whenever needed.
Also...
Song Name: Sallyforth's Theme Overall Rating: 9 What emotions did the song give you: Worry, apprehension, uncertainty. What did you think of when listening to the song: This character is a deep thinker, struggling to make sense of things and consumed by worry of Am I making the right choice?. I can see them standing there, worry and fear written across their eyes as they stare blankly at the scene before them, mentally screaming, "I don't want to make this choice!" Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/ill-fitting: No. Other: I listened to about three seconds and my first thought was: This piece makes you sit down and think. I can imagine this piece playing when the character is faced with those difficult choices you mentioned.
...Did I forget to mention I tend to latch onto characters easily and thus hate when games force me to make vital choices for them? Especially if one of the choices is to kill/get rid of a character while the other choice is to save them, because there is always that small chance they will betray you later on, and at the same time I've latched on, I don't want to let go... well, you get the idea.
Edited By Latif on 11/19/2020 at 11:54 AM.
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