These two will probably unleash some sort of terror apon the world if they grow up. Xd
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 10:18 PM
Post #52
true true
scary thoughts
Rubycookie
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:01 PM
Post #53
I...still can't accept her. Her hair has to at least be dyed, and aqua isn't a natural eye color. Also, she can't wear a cloth over her eyes. shes going into a dark forest at night. You don't have to make a form for her brother at all actually, and if you do, please write out a detailed description or provide a picture, because his appearance is a bit...offensive. Also stick to the form I wrote out, please.
Edited By Rubycookie on 8/13/2020 at 11:04 PM.
Soulshard
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:15 PM
Post #54
i have totally re-done it ;-;
Name: alaska moonfrost
Age: 18
Gender: female
Appearance: albino (red eyes and white hair). long hair and pale skin (albino's do have pale skin). often covers her eyes and puts her hair in a braid. she's also blind in both eyes.
Personality: kinda cold, not very talkative, hates school but still is a strait a's student.
How long you've known Penelope: about 3 months. she is new to the neighborhood
Closest friend out of your group: she, more or less, has a new favorite each day. its the one that talks to her the least XD.
What do you think happened to her?(besides murder): she left on the full moon, so she's a were wolf!
Other: is an orphan and is looked after by her gran
Edited By Soulshard on 8/13/2020 at 11:57 PM.
Rubycookie
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:26 PM
Post #55
thats...better. however blind people don't have an eye color, her eye color would be a dull gray. but if her eyes were...reddish(lets just say red-brown bc red is also not a natural eye color) before she was blind that would be acceptable.
Also...its probably not a good idea to make her blind. Shes going into a forest. At night.
Edited By Rubycookie on 8/13/2020 at 11:41 PM.
Soulshard
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:50 PM
Post #56
actually, red is NO eye colour. you see its red because the veins in the eyes are exposed. she is able to have 'red' eyes, but they are only red because there is no (blue, brown, etc) pigment. but she would be born blind so it realy doesnt matter XD. her eyes are a grayish-red when she uncovers them.
Rubycookie
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:53 PM
Post #57
okayy but theres still the matter that shes blind in the first place. A large part of the story is seeing, and it would honestly be difficult to try to work around her blindness.
Soulshard
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Posted: 8/13/2020 at 11:56 PM
Post #58
well, often people with impaired vision have hightened hearing and touch so... yeah! she can just hear stuff better than her freinds :). ive also cut out the brother stuff
Edited By Soulshard on 8/13/2020 at 11:57 PM.
Rubycookie
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Posted: 8/14/2020 at 12:13 AM
Post #59
It'll still be difficult, but alright. There will be a much higher chance that she might die. Or get hurt. Severly.
Soulshard
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Posted: 8/14/2020 at 12:30 AM
Post #60
i dont care. in another rp one of my characters died. she was one of my favs, but i needed to put a bit of dark back into it and she died of frost. she is just realy.. idk... oh well
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