Sure ^^

I'd refer you to the first update, I believe the link is in the first post. Would love to hear comments and/or criticism ^^

Can I be added to the ping list? The story seems amazing so far and I can't wait to see what it turns into.

Thank you so much ^^

What part interested you the most?

I dont know that much about music, so here goes nothin.

Song Name: Miasma
Overall Rating (1-10): 10
What emotions did the song give you?: Curiosity, tension/excitement.
What did you think of when listening to the song?: Mystery, wonder, & that Id want to explore the area.
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: N/a
Other: N/a

Song Name: Reminiscene
Overall Rating (1-10): 10
What emotions did the song give you?: Happy, tranquil.
What did you think of when listening to the song?: Familiarity(?)
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: N/a
Other: It lives up to its name.

Not much to say about the last 2, except that I enjoyed them lol.

Loving the plot & songs so far~ c:

Four ratings total and they've all been 10's. That's kinda freaky tbh xD

Thank you!

Idk just the whole story in general? One thing I do wonder is where the miasma came from or why it appeared. It could be interesting if along the way the main character finds information of others trying to create a portal to another world dated from before when everything with the miasma happened.

It might be something like that. The story really isn't build well atm.

I'd love to help, if you need any help with character designs (specifically females, but I could try males as well)
I also love the story so far or at least the idea. ^-^ I can't wait to see where this goes, and I hope I can help.

Song Name: Miasma
Overall Rating (1-10): 100!
What emotions did the song give you?: I'm not sure how to explain it, kind of like a joyless, sad reminiscence. Ex: your childhood home burnt down and you are devastated and remember the good times and miss them.
What did you think of when listening to the song?: I imagined a village burning down and a dark smokey sky, bright flames and the sound of people screaming. Kind of foggy like a bad dream.
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: Not at all!
Other: This is probably my favorite! It's so powerful, and I love it!

Song Name: Reminiscence
Overall Rating (1-10): 9
What emotions did the song give you?: Nostalgia
What did you think of when listening to the song?: It reminds me of seeing a childhood friend for the first time in years. Or a scene in anime where friends are just playing.
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: Not that I can think of.
Other: I like the simplicity of this one. I think it helps with the nostalgic feeling.

Song Name: Hometown
Overall Rating (1-10): 5
What emotions did the song give you?: It made me kind of uneasy with the lower upbeat tune.
What did you think of when listening to the song?: Not really anything. Based on how I felt I'd think of little red riding hood walking through the woods. Happy but cautious.
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: Not really. Something's off but I can't really place it.
Other: I think the tune is too similar to Reminiscence. Hometown sounds like a part of reminiscence was put on loop. (I'm so sorry if this is too harsh and hurt your feelings!)

Song Name: Sallyforth's Theme
Overall Rating (1-10): 8
What emotions did the song give you?: None really
What did you think of when listening to the song?: I think the character it's based off of hard a pretty good fun childhood. Nothing special happened or anything. I feel like if there was a part two it would end up turning dark though ^-^"
Are there any instruments that are too loud/quiet/harsh/not fitting?: Not really.
Other: Good job ^-^


Edit: Could I please be added to the pinglist?

Hello! this looks interesting and I'd like to help! I can do character concepts/art/animation (assuming you want frame-by-frame), but I am under 18 and don't have any professional training. My art is sort of low-res but not quite 8-bit style. also willing to offer criticism, although again, I don't have professional training. Plz PM me if I can help!

also can I be added to the ping list?

I actually love having the criticism ^^

The looping thing for hometwon is probably because it's so short. Definetly something I will fix. I'll also knock the melody up an octave.

Thank you so much. It means a lot to me ^^