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TheRedDragon
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Joined: 8/11/2016
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Posted: 8/24/2016 at 11:02 AM
Post #31
I really want to enter again, even though I won last time...should I not do that? I mean, you can of course not count me or something but I love the pets you have us write about...
Typhix
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The Artistic
Joined: 7/21/2015
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Posted: 8/24/2016 at 11:26 AM
Post #32
I'm writing about number 3 :)
A small, female Qitari with black an blue spikey mane and tail walked through a forest. The moon shown bright, guiding her through the trees. Owls hooted, and small night critters poked their heads out and stare at the Qitari.
She sighed. Was it even worth living now? She thought. The Vulnyx and Lupora are ruining everything! I was suppose to find my perfect family!
The young Qitari had just escaped a orphanage, her dream of finding her parents had been so big, but now, not even a spark existed.
When she had gotten out, she had gone to the nearest den and had asked if any Qitari couple had lost, or had to give away a female Qitari a year ago. They had all said no, even when she asked if any looked like herself. Many of the den Sylesti's were nervous, glancing from side to side. The young Qitari knew why they were nervous. Lately, the Vulnyx and Lupora had come together, and was taking over towns of Sylesti, ruling harshly over them.
Now the Qitari was wandering alone, in a woods, at night. She wondered why she hadn't been caught yet.
The Qitari jumpped when she heard howling, and paw steps thump rapidly against the ground. The Qitari saw two large Lupora running toward her, faster then she could ever run. But she turned and ran anyways.
She had only gotten a few leaps, when one came crashing on her. They both skidded around, and the second Lupora jumped on her, holding her down.
"Look what we got here!" the second Lupora grinned evily. His breath smelled like rotten eggs. "A tresspasser! Haha!"
The first Lupora glared at him. "Thats not funny. Lets get rid of her."
The second Lupora frowned, and they tied the Qitari's mouth.
"Why not her feet?" the second one asked the first.
"So she can walk, duh! Those things are heavier then they look you know! One time, me and me friend had a full grown one, and we's could barely pull it!" the first one growled.
"But this one ain't full grown."
"Almost."
The two Lupora started pulling the Qitari along, though she pulled back, making the trip to where ever they were going much longer.
The Qitari's stomach dropped when she heard the sounds of a river close by. When it was in full view, the Lupora's tied her feet, and pulled her to the edge of the river.
Water slapped up against her, it was freezing!
"Good-bye little Qitari! This is what you get for tresspassing." the first one said, pushing her off.
"Aww, that one was pretty." she heard the second one say before she hit the water.
The Qitari struggled against her bindings, ripping her front legs vines off, but the back were stongerly tied. The vine at her mouth loosely came off, and she gasped for air. But the current pushed her back under the water. All went dark when she hit a large rock.
****
The sound of trickling water made the Qitari open her eyes a slit, then close them.
Then she realized what had happened, and jumped up. Water fell off her side, dripping into the small stream she was standing in.
She coughed water up, and her head throbbed from the rocks. She looked to see a small forest in front of her, and she was standing in a small stream that came out of the river. The bindings on her hind feet were gone, and her whole body ached.
The Qitari slowly walked into the forest, and laid in some tall grass, drifting to sleep.
She awoke to the sound of voices.
"Is she dead?" one said.
"No..... she's breathing still. But she looks pretty beaten up...." said a second voice.
The Qitari pushed up to her side, looking at two Bulbori. There was a black and blue one, the male, and a brown and pink one, the female. The male had a smirk on his face as her elbowed the female.
"Told ya I was right!"
The female ignored him, and hopped up beside the Qitari's head.
"Are you alright? What happened? Whats your name?"
"My name is Friz. And I think I'm okay...." the Qitari said.
"My name is Has, and this," she pointed to the male, "is Clasp."
"Nice to meet you both. Do you know where I am?" Friz asked.
"You are in Small Meadow." Clasp said.
"Are the Lupora and Vulnyx ruling this place, too?"
"Nope. You're safe here!" Clasp said.
"Good. I think I'll be fine. I should be on my way." Friz stood.
"Okay, bye!" Has waved a paw.
Friz walked away, to the edge of the forest. The wind twisted her feathery mane and tail around.
"This seems like a good place..." Friz said to herself. "I think I'll like it here...."
THE END
Thanks!
Pyromantic
Level 69
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 4/10/2016
Threads: 16
Posts: 891
Posted: 8/24/2016 at 11:54 AM
Post #33
Sure! Go ahead and write another story!
You won't be able to win two weeks in a row, however. I love reading the interesting stories people post! :D
Pyromantic
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The Sweet Tooth
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Posts: 891
Posted: 8/28/2016 at 8:43 PM
Post #34
bumpity bompity boo
Pyromantic
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Posted: 8/29/2016 at 4:09 PM
Post #35
Congratulations to Skywing for winning this week!
Glorifying
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The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/16/2014
Threads: 35
Posts: 366
Posted: 8/29/2016 at 7:02 PM
Post #36
Ooh thank you so much! Hold on, I'll edit my post when I figure out which of your pets I want a cute little one from. ^-^
Pyromantic
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Posted: 9/1/2016 at 7:12 AM
Post #37
Bumpi bumpi bumpa
Pyromantic
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Posted: 9/2/2016 at 7:17 AM
Post #38
bump bump
Pyromantic
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Posted: 9/3/2016 at 6:31 AM
Post #39
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Pyromantic
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Posted: 9/4/2016 at 6:35 AM
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