Ohhhh yeah I'll do that c:
Not really sure what to put but uh, I'll try my best

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I polished it up, my writing style is wack. Just tell me if it seems good enough to post.




A teen male was at the male with his friends on a Saturday. It was late out and the mall would be closing soon. His friends were messing around near the edge of the platform. He was hanging over the glass barrier, letting his friends play fight before they got out of there.

Sadly one pushed right against him and the weight of the push made the glass break, causing the male to fall down. The group was horrified, today wasn't suppose to end this way. They leaned over the side carefully, looking at the shattered glass around the male who was bent in such an unnatural way on the ground.

One was already on the phone, panicking while calling for help. Everybody had rushed down and the people below had been panicking too, some going over to the male to see if he was alive.

Help arrived and he was taken to the hospital, yet he sadly died in surgery. The group was horrified, but they had no idea what was about to come next. His mother was furious, grieving and not in the right place of mind. She wanted revenge, revenge on the friends for her boy dying instead of them.

She took it into her owns hands, tracking down the group. Successfully killing all of them except for one. She had cornered the last in the girls house, planning on taking her life and getting revenge. The girl, she had a weapon on her. Having grabbed one as she ran through the house.

They were fixing the bathroom, so a hammer was left out on the bathroom counter. As she ran down the hall to her room she had luckily managed to grab it. The mother, she had a knife. The chances of the girl living were slim.

The mother couldn't think straight, even from the beginning. She missed her chance to get the girl as she came closer. The girl had already hit her in the head with the hammer, bashing her skull in. She repeated the action, fear and adrenaline still running through her.

Soon after she calmed down, she realized what she had done. Naturally she called the police and they came. Taking the dead and helping the girl. It was self defense, she was in the right here.

The mall had soon shut down though, and for a few decades it's been abandoned. Supposedly a group of teens went in, the area was run down, the mall was run down, everything was run down. They set up a meeting spot and one had already tried to scare them by saying the boy who died had came back. Trying to get revenge for what happened to him and his mother.

Naturally they didn't believe him, causing them all to meet their end in the small time they spent there. Nobody goes into the mall though, so everybody just labeled them as missing. Sadly nobody else learned from them and a new group had came in. Whatever happens to them will surely teach them a lesson.

The form
Age is teens, remember?
So I'd say 15 - 18 for age

Backstory should be needed I think, well I don't really care tbh.

Romance in a horror RP!?
Seems a bit weird but it'll work

Strengths and Weaknesses will be needed for me, so I say have people at least put down 1 strength or weakness.
The rest seems optional.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=84150&page=33#327 Author: Flowerfeather Time Posted: 1/7/2020 at 9:49 PM The form Age is teens, remember? So I'd say 15 - 18 for age Backstory should be needed I think, well I don't really care tbh. Romance in a horror RP!? Seems a bit weird but it'll work Strengths and Weaknesses will be needed for me, so I say have people at least put down 1 strength or weakness. The rest seems optional.

Sorry Cactus I keep forgetting to ping you :(

One chqracter per person?
Sorry I'm on mobile now
Bleh I suck at romance in general heh

It's okay, it happens ^-^
I'll exclude crushes and relationships, doesnt seem like it'd be good if they're all gonna die anyways. Strengths and weaknesses are definitely gonna be in it

(I'm on mobile too. I should be going to bed because I have school tomorrow but I always go to school tired so I think I'll be fine.)