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Alison280
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Snow Wars Mastermind
Joined: 7/23/2018
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 12:56 PM Post #281
I've been forgetting to post on this thread but if anyone could critique my designs here, it would be appreciated :P
Cececat
Level 75
Shadow of the Moon
Joined: 4/25/2017
Threads: 193
Posts: 3,887
Posted: 7/28/2020 at 1:03 PM Post #282
Critiques for mine as well? Anything would be much appreciated. :)

Designs are 2vis-3vis on the left and 6vis on the right


Song Sparrow Lighira


Sea Cove Nytekrie



Blue Loster Qitari



Summer Squid Sylvorpa




Jelly Blubber Zolnixi


Edited By Cececat on 7/29/2020 at 2:12 PM.
Lenore
Level 75
Sylestiologist
Joined: 2/3/2015
Threads: 52
Posts: 735
Posted: 7/28/2020 at 1:18 PM Post #283
Chasing Fireflies Nyte
Maybe use more blues for the body and yellow-greens for the accents to give the feel of chasing fireflies at night? Right now the design is very brown.

Example of a more blue centric color scheme:



Freshly Squeezed Lemonade Puff
Big fan of the direction of this design. I would just be careful to make sure the C3 is not the only place the green is being brought in. If traits are selected that don't pull from it, the contrast is lost really quickly (Ex: G1 Tapir, and a good portion of the G2 traits).

Example Adjustments:



Sprinkled Sundae Qit
There's a lot going on with this design. Maybe narrow the "sprinkle" colors down to three to create a more cohesive color palette? Adding a stronger color to the Qit's scales might help bring the colors together.

Example Adjustments:
Lenore
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 1:32 PM Post #284
Song Sparrow Lighira
The overall color choices are very nice.
While I like the blue that's pulled in for G1/G2, given the theme it might be nice to see more of a reddish brown there and the blue pulled in elsewhere for accents and have the C3 reflect more of the tawny color and less red (or reverse that with a tawny G1/G2 and a reddish brown C3). For M1/M2 maybe pull a reddish pink from the legs so it's less bubblegum like? The blue could be nice there too.

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Cececat
Level 75
Shadow of the Moon
Joined: 4/25/2017
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 5:50 PM Post #285
Oo I love that thank you so much for the suggestions, I was very stuck on those pesky Lighs XD
Edited By Cececat on 7/28/2020 at 5:50 PM.
Cececat
Level 75
Shadow of the Moon
Joined: 4/25/2017
Threads: 193
Posts: 3,887
Posted: 7/28/2020 at 11:01 PM Post #286
I'd just like to run this new design past you, I took what you said into account and this is what I've done with it.



I do wish there was more blue but I'm not sure where to work it in, everywhere I put it doesn't look right so I've left it at this. :)
Lenore
Level 75
Sylestiologist
Joined: 2/3/2015
Threads: 52
Posts: 735
Posted: 7/29/2020 at 12:03 AM Post #287
I really like what youve done with it! My only suggestion would be to possibly add the blue to the wings as well, since the body is very pink heavy and they dont really stand out as much as they could.

Cececat
Level 75
Shadow of the Moon
Joined: 4/25/2017
Threads: 193
Posts: 3,887
Posted: 7/29/2020 at 12:08 AM Post #288
True! Thanks for all of you're help, I really appreciate it. ^^

Edited By Cececat on 7/29/2020 at 12:14 AM.
Hiraeth
Level 75
Hand of Destiny
Joined: 7/14/2015
Threads: 187
Posts: 2,685
Posted: 7/29/2020 at 9:16 AM Post #289
I haven't been super active but! I'll try to critique any designs I see from now on! I promise.
Anyhow, here's my design threads: Themed, Non-themed
And here are a few of my summer themed designs (Just a reminder, these are palettes for themes, not actual designs. Traits are random.):
Golden Plover Puffadore
No vis:

6 vis:

3 vis:

Popsicle Nephini
No vis:

6 vis:

3 vis:

Crab Beach Qitari
No vis:

6 vis:

3 vis:
Marichoness
Level 75
The Fortuitous
Joined: 8/28/2019
Threads: 54
Posts: 1,890
Posted: 7/29/2020 at 1:21 PM Post #290
I absolutely love the Song Sparrow Lighs! You put the colors in the perfect slot to enhance it no matter the trait! I love it!

The Sea cove Nytes are wonderful, the on;ly thing I'd suggest is to make the colors more friendly. Sea Coves are amazing things and the Nytes portray it as a little more on the eerie side.

For the Blue Lobster Qits, they remind me of another Qit theme I've seen around, (I'm not sure which one though) so you should do something that makes yours Stand out. It should let everyone know "I'm no ordinary theme! I'm Blue Lobster!" Just experiment with some colors, see what could make it stand out.

The Summer Squid Vorps are beautiful! The only thing is, they don'[t match with the picture. Maybe change the name?

Jelly blubber Nixi, Very unique! I'm honestly not sure what your inspiration is...
My suggestion would be less yellows and maybe change the name here too.
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