Erwinn's head swiveled around to scam the distant horizon. Sighing to herself, she took in the beauty. Her golden feathers rustled as she glided over the islands and the ocean. Erwinn then tipped her wings and banked back to that familiar island. Her paws brushed the long grasses as she landed gracefully, slowing to a stop. She padded back to the camp, brown-gold fur glowing in the bright sun.
Hawke
Level 73
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/7/2013
Threads: 324
Posts: 16,550
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 5:13 PM
Post #12
"How about a swim then? Or a race to see who can fly fastest! Come on we can't just sit around all the time Dori!"
"Please stop calling me that." The brown wolf answered as he stood stretching only to get licked in the face by the white haired wolf. "Stop that!!"
"Oh come on you know you like it! Now come on! I'll race you to the watering hole!" Dexion said stretching his wings and taking flight. The larger brown wolf shook his head before following.
Scoutwolf
Level 57
Scout
Joined: 10/25/2018
Threads: 36
Posts: 9,331
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 5:18 PM
Post #13
(I would like to get pinged no matter what. I want to know what's happening. Sorry, I won't ping any more.)
Eclipse trotted to his den, right wing dragging. He couldn't lift it an inch. Eclipse decided that it was now truly annoying, as it snagged on another branch that was hanging low. He sighed again and tugged it loose, sending waves of pain through it. He eyed his wing suspiciously.
"You're trying to get me killed, aren't you?" he said, dead seriously. Eclipse continued walking over to his den, where he settled down, putting his head in his paws, not expecting to move until sun down.
Or maybe even sun up.
(Character is willing to interact. Just come up with something good, if you want character to interact with mine.)
Edited By Scoutwolf on 11/13/2018 at 5:21 PM.
Agentngyes
Level 35
Joined: 10/11/2018
Threads: 15
Posts: 312
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 5:34 PM
Post #14
Silico flew back to where Mia was feeding her the food Flame told her to feed her. "Eat up Mia, you have to go to training with dad soon." Silico said while Mia ate. "Ok mom." Mia said, she flew away using life sense to find her father. Then she found him, she flew to the small forest where none lived, except for prey of course, it was sometimes used for hunting. " There you are Mia, ready to train?" Flame said. "Yes father." She replied. ( is my roleplay style weird or? )
Aura
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/4/2018
Threads: 73
Posts: 1,167
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 5:53 PM
Post #15
(Nah, it's good. Only thing I recommend is to split dialogue into paragraphs, as it makes it much simpler and easier to read. ^o^)
Aura
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/4/2018
Threads: 73
Posts: 1,167
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 6:09 PM
Post #16
(That's okay!)
Erwinn
Erwinn entered the camp. She glanced around, only to find nothing interesting. She beat her wings once, and with dust billowing around her, lifted of into the sky.
Suddenly, Erwinn caught a scent drifting on the wind. She banked and followed it, wings tipped back to slow her flight. Her nose tipped up and she opened her mouth wide, catching the scent, stronger. Beating her wings faster, she came up on a forest, where the scent was its strongest. It was a wolf; male. Slowing to a stop, she landed. Erwinn cautiously walked through the forest.
Catching the scent of pain, she quickened her pace, coming up on a den-like area with a winged wolf laying down, right wing limp.
"Ah!" Erwinn gasped. "Are you okay? Do you need help?" She asked, pointedly staring at the wolf's broken wing.
"It was smooth." Arackin replied. "Nothing suspicious other than loner evidence. Raune ran off again.... Do you know where she went?" He asked Havenloft. The ruby-coated wolf was hopefully not too far, but as the heir to the alphas at least one wolf must accompany her outside of camp, due to the increased activity of loners. Arackin knew that Raune hated it, but they both knew that the alphas would kill someone if everyone but her was at camp. Or at least degrade to Omega.
Agentngyes
Level 35
Joined: 10/11/2018
Threads: 15
Posts: 312
Posted: 11/13/2018 at 6:46 PM
Post #20
The training was over, Mia seemed to be worn out, but she was more of a ready to fight again, "Training is over Mia" Flame said as he flew home.
Mia flew around to cool off, noticing that there was a dead wolf on the ground. " Oh no! W-who did this?" Devastated she thought it would be a good idea to report to Havenloft.
She flew to Havenloft quickly, "HAVENLOFT SOMEONE MURDERED A WOLF HERE!" She yelled.
Edited By Agentngyes on 11/13/2018 at 6:47 PM.
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