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Poisonivyperson
Level 47
Joined: 11/8/2017
Threads: 7
Posts: 347
Posted: 1/12/2019 at 5:44 PM
Post #11
8/10 The color combination and colors themselves are awesome. Very unique, very original. But(at least to me) it could use a few more of them. Like, maybe more noticeable genes(or more genes) in the existing colors would be amazing. Like, something on the wings probably, if it'd work. Just so you know, I am kind of known(wrong word sorry, couldn't think of a better one...) for creating extremely colorful and extravagant designs, so my rating is probably a little off to most other people. In the sense that I'm criticizing it for the wrong things or something... oh well.
My Design :)
I finished this design a few days ago, and it has been pretty popular. Most people have complimented me on it, but I would like to know if there's anything I can change/add/take away to make it better. I was going for a dawn/dusk kind of thing, but I muted the colors a bit -bright orange and neon pink do NOT go well together- so it is a little(*cough* a lot *cough*) incorrect.
Edited By Poisonivyperson on 1/12/2019 at 5:46 PM.
Cormeum
Level 63
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 7/6/2018
Threads: 49
Posts: 1,044
Posted: 1/12/2019 at 6:35 PM
Post #12
8/10
Why?
I really like the colors and how they work together. But one thing that kind of bothered me was the pure white. You said you were sorta going for a dusk/dawn theme, so I suggest you add some cream/ivory. When I think of dawn, I think of a mix of soft and bold colors. Here's what I'm thinking:
But overall, I love your design! It looks pretty balanced, if you know what I mean^^;.
My Design
I was looking to submit this as a Summer theme entry, but it didn't look quite right yet. It was based a Honeydew-Kiwi Smoothie like the one below:
Lalalanmao
Level 75
Trickster
Joined: 5/23/2017
Threads: 57
Posts: 7,106
Posted: 1/12/2019 at 6:58 PM
Post #13
8/10
I feel like something that's missing is that there isn't a popping color. It all kinda just blends in without a bright accent color. Also the smoothie in the picture seems to be darker speckled with black. Maybe you could incorporate it more. Also maybe the accent color could be a brighter green? Otherwise, I really like the colors and the idea :)
My Design
I'm making a seven deadly sins project, but I don't feel like this is giving off a pride vibe.
Edited By Lalalanmao on 1/12/2019 at 7:02 PM.
Username116504
Level 63
The Sweet Tooth
Joined: 8/26/2018
Threads: 88
Posts: 1,574
Posted: 1/15/2019 at 5:56 PM
Post #14
7/10
Well the colors don't pop, try black instead of white and when i think of pride i think of dark to ligh purple so vary the purple shades.
Heres mine (might make it into progect
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