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Alison280
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 12:32 PM
Post #171
Thank you!
Larkian
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 12:37 PM
Post #172
Any chance I can get some criticism on these 3 for Summer Fest?
Key Lime Pie Luffox
(unsure how summery that is lol)
Salty Sea Vulnyx
(kind of a mess but... eh)
Frothing Tide Qitari
(need to put more of that tan somewhere)
Edited By Larkian on 7/7/2020 at 12:38 PM.
Rashomon
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 2:55 PM
Post #173
The Luff is super cute, although I don't really think the black-gray-color suits it well...it kinda stands out and draws everything away from the main tan and lime.
For the Vul, I'd recommend adding in more blue to represent the "sea" part. It's mostly cobalt and cream, and I think the cream amount should be lessened. The cobalt is really great though!
The Qitari. Is. Amazing. I don't like Qits in general...but this one....*awwwww* I love it! :)
Winterflower
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 3:20 PM
Post #174
I don't know much about key lime pie so I can't really say anything about how it represents the theme. I think the colours work well together though so it's not a bad design.
The vul is okay but I think you should change the eye colour to a blue and maybe one of the other colours as well?
Hiraeth
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Hand of Destiny
Joined: 7/14/2015
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 3:36 PM
Post #175
These designs are wonderful! Nothing to say about the Luff <3
The Salty Sea might benefit from some more saturated colors, as right now it invokes more of a Stormy Sea. Still gorgeous, though~
Also I noticed a lot of the genes are similar lightness, which might lead to muddling.
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I like the Frothing Tide design - perhaps make the beige brighter? Other than that, it's great. :)
Larkian
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 6:02 PM
Post #176
Thank you for the feedback! I'm not sure what you mean by the black-gray part? Do you mean the dark green? That's the darkest part I could find haha.
I'll see about putting in some blue, thanks ^^
Ahhhh tysm! I actually didn't think I did too well on the Qit, so that's great to hear!
Larkian
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 6:02 PM
Post #177
Thank you! I'll see if I can add some more blue to the Vul haha.
Larkian
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Posted: 7/7/2020 at 6:04 PM
Post #178
Ooh, the edit looks really nice! I'm probably going to throw in some blues, everyone's been saying that about the Vulnyx, haha.
Thanks for the criticism!
Sonrisa
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Posted: 7/8/2020 at 11:01 AM
Post #179
Got a few more. I like the idea of the Nyvene but can not figure out how to make it work.
Rosey Succulent Draeyl
Strawberry Luminary Luffox
Oceanblown Sands Nyvene
Edited By Sonrisa on 7/8/2020 at 11:01 AM.
Beaubuddyz
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 2/23/2020
Threads: 157
Posts: 8,664
Posted: 7/8/2020 at 11:22 AM
Post #180
1: I love the design; the colors work really well with the traits and make it stand out. (You accidentally made it male/male, lol)
2: I love how you used the brown on the female's wings with a tint of green! I'd like to see more of that on the male though.
3: (The drayl's nose is suddenly really weirding me out, XD) The only thing I might change is the trait on the stomach, but otherwise, it looks great!!!
Can't wait to see more designs from you!!!
-Beau
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