"Or I can give my soul if you give my brother's soul back. I can control fire, I can shift, I can commune with animals. Give my brother's soul back and I'll give you mine." I started shaking and my body felt like it was getting colder. As my body heat dropped I felt a sharp pain in my side and my inner animal decided to try and make it's way to the surface. The seal was starting to break and it took all my strength to fight against it.


I decided to add a bit of a twist to my character. I hope it's not 'god playing' or whatever that's called.

He eyed you
Perhaps I will...
Himmat and shook you gently
Miss, please don't leave me..



It's fine, I do it all the time and it adds some spice to the story!

"It's okay Himmat. I won't leave you, but I won't have my soul. So I don't know what will happen.." I started itching and I scratched at it feeling my animal's ear. Thinking to myself, Damnit Serenity; you had to bust through the seal? My animal responded with a yip in my head saying, well your fault for finding something to protect. Now you lose your soul and I'm taking over. Don't worry, Himmat won't see a difference but that man in the hat will think you have gone lifeless. Himmat will faint with you and when you wake up I'll be in control. Realizing I was staring off into space I quickly shook my head and the ears disappeared. Knowing my animal had a plan I glared at the man again(or for the first time) and recrossed my arms. "You have to give my brother's soul back before I give you mine. You can control my animal, my power, my soul. If you give his back." My body was still shaking and my animal tried to break through again. "You better hurry, my animal is trying to break the remainder of the seal."


Cool. Also sorry it's a paragraph xD I'm getting way to into my animal

The Man just stared at you, kinda glaring
What kind of Beast is it?
Himmat began to cry
Miss, he will take your entire soul and you'll be a mindless being walking into trees and such

He smirked
I'm sure there's something else involved in this mess too, Risen
He blinked and his eyes were smaller slits and were turquoise

He laughed
But that's exactly what I want you foolish human, I already sold my soul and so should you Risen...there is no more feeling once you let go of your soul..No pain, no sadness, all of it's gone forever

"Take it. Give his back. I don't care!" Her ears popped up again but this time the pain in my side expanded to all over my body and bones felt like cracking. The seal was almost destroyed. "Hurry! Give him his soul and take mine! The.. Seal is almost.. Broken."


I keep getting distracted. sorry for late responces

He smiled let his soul go, which then cause Himmat to pass out and the man just sat there
Nah, I'll just let you destroy what you love most first