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Limor
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 8:47 PM
Post #101
mine v summoning circle
Theialish
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 8:54 PM
Post #102
I see the difference now.
I usually have a harder time rating designs if they don't have a reference. Do the griffi and lupora designs have a reference?
As for the lighira, the brown color seems off. It seems too dark compared to the brown on the hippo. The hippo's face has a very dark brown shade that I don't see. Honestly though, the pink is a nice touch!
DebaucheryTeaParty
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The Tactician
Joined: 11/5/2015
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 9:17 PM
Post #103
I think the Ligh is perfect! I wouldn't change a thing on that design!
I love the Ocean Wayside but I kind of agree that the color palate is pretty common. Maybe try changing the darker orange to a hot pink and the yellow to a vibrant green? Go for a more tropical vibe?
I really like the Blue Snowcone Lup, but I don't think that green looks good on it. Maybe replace it with a light blue/gray color?
Sawbill
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The Perfectionist
Joined: 1/6/2020
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 10:16 PM
Post #104
Ooh, the Lighira is PeRfEcT! Griffi as well.
The green-blue on the Lup is just...off. I suggest it be replaced by a light color or moved somewhere else in the design.
Edited By Sawbill on 6/28/2020 at 10:24 PM.
Marichoness
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The Fortuitous
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 11:04 PM
Post #105
I really appreciate your input on my designs! Definitely gave me a whole new perspective, I love it!
Marichoness
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The Fortuitous
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Posted: 6/28/2020 at 11:11 PM
Post #106
I love the Ligh design! I can;t easily find anything I'd change honestly! If you need me to suggest something, the only thing I've got is maybe darken their coat color.
The Ocean Wayside is a very creative design and I like the colors! My only suggestion is to try darkening their Orange you used in their Gene colors.
Blue coconut snow cone! Very creative idea! Using the name, try and find somewhere you can throw in more coconut (white)
Theialish
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Posted: 6/29/2020 at 8:33 AM
Post #107
Any critique for these three theme ideas?
Sonrisa
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Ghost Writer
Joined: 3/27/2017
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Posted: 6/29/2020 at 10:01 AM
Post #108
The Lighira are gorgeous, really. I can definitely see them being a theme soon. Threw them in the generator and messed around, they have a lot of potential and no changes that I would make.
As for the Griffi, I also have a hard time making criticism. At first glance, the blank with no traits makes the M3 look very dark and clashing, but when adding a G2 it balances. Not a problem with the design, just a thing to work around when dealing with Griffi.
The Lupora is the only one I have criticism for. There was a lot of blending and not much contrast, in my opinion. The bright G3 did not really fit with the rest of the cool, calm looking design. (It did work nicely with the Lunar Runes, but that was about it.) The M3 was very bright and stood out, I darkened that as well.
Edited By Sonrisa on 6/29/2020 at 10:01 AM.
Sawbill
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Posted: 6/29/2020 at 11:09 AM
Post #109
The Lupora's colors seem random and disconnected to a theme. The red and pink just throw the design into more of a dishwater design. I suggest you add more similar colors and remove some of that pink and red.
The Griffi looks nice, though more contrast in the shades of blues and pinks would make the design more eye-catching.
I have nothing really to say about the Morkko, but maybe darken the white?
Theialish
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Posted: 6/29/2020 at 11:24 AM
Post #110
I was basing the lup off the image. I should've picked a less colourful umbrella.
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