I am interested in this.

do you have any suggestions for it? I know the basic plot is a lot like some other rpg's I've played and stories I've read (my subconscious is not very creative) and while the inner details are somewhat "unique" I understand that it's quite generic at the core and I want to improve it as much as possible.

[though I will add that the political system and government structure is impeccable - by which I mean detailed as heck and I'm proud of it - and I am desperate to talk about it so... y'know... if ya wanna..)

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For a few suggestions I would add different routes depending on the choices a character would make in the RPG. For example if they do many bad things the route is that they may become evil or they do many good things and saves their world they are considered a hero but these are suggestions and most of the MC in rpgs that I played are always the hero so it would be nice and a refresher for the Mc to be a bad guy.

Oh I actually took that into consideration, at first I was thinking of this more as an interactive story than an RPG (there is a difference, but if I get into that I will be up late), and I kind of wanted some pretty easy options at first, and since most people would probably want to be the heroine of the story I planned out some potential options and eventually made the action options a lot harder to choose between and I planned it all to come to one single ending where the MC realizes that - in their attempt to be a hero in the eyes of the people - they had become not just a villain, but a monster, but then I realized that that probably wouldn't go over well with mostly younger kids as players so I kinda just scrapped it.
Some parts of it I still really like though.

True on the kids part and them not taking it well and liking some of it. Honestly I would go with what you want to do in an Rpg but also take reference from other Rpg or novels similar to rpg and take inspiration from them and all that for doing an RPG that's appropriate for the younger kids that play on sylestia.

Well, there's really no way to avoid conflict in this world, I mean for obvious reasons there would already be political tension between royal families over land distribution and fertile farmland as well as other minor & major altercations - which is something I'll get into another time - I also feel like some parts of side-quests or just general plot information could potentially become boring for the younger kids since it wouldn't all be action or fighting or drama and I don't plan on much romance either. Everything is subject to change right now but I already know that if the story is just constant brawls or drama instead of background information to back it up that it would just become uninteresting altogether. I want to figure out a way for it to be fun for all ages but that's really hard to do without excluding a lot of important information that gives the plot more meaning than just "these characters are bad, must defeat and save the world" when it's way different than that and all the NPC's have so much more depth than that would allow me to show. What do you think?

I think that is a great Idea since it would also give the NPC's characters and how they came to be and it would make the plot more interesting with that.

The thing I'm worried about is its appeal to both the younger kids as well as those who are older, littles get bored easily and I know even I sometimes feel like the battle parts in stories or RPG's get a little tedious, maybe I'm overthinking it, but I want it to be something people really like. I'll obviously adjust minor detail points and the parts I think are too generic, that's already a given, and one day I want to make my own creations here actual video games instead of something on a thread so I wanna figure out most details now rather than later.

True on that and it is hard to make an RPG for all ages and that is a good idea to do it now then do it later.