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Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/24/2020 at 12:51 PM Post #1
I would really appriciate it if someone were to critique my designs so.. yeah..
Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/24/2020 at 12:58 PM Post #2
Designs

Midsummer's Dream/Summer Sunset (Which name is better?) Aeridini

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Mariana Trench Aurleon

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Citris Blast Bulbari



Poolside Punch Draeyl

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Summer Cookout Faelora



Pineapple Coconut Cake Ferrikki

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Pink Ombre Griffi



Pastel Morning Kelpari



Blinding Lights Lighari



Blissful Rainstorm Luffox

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Rainforest Lunera



Summer Haze Lupora



Forrest Morkko



Stormy Seas Nephini



Hidden Cove Ne'vene

Edited By Beaubuddyz on 7/30/2020 at 3:40 PM.
Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/24/2020 at 12:59 PM Post #3
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Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/25/2020 at 2:46 PM Post #4
Chasing Fireflies Nyte

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Freshly Squeesed Lemonade Puff

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Sprinkled Sundae Qit

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Meteor Shower Ryori



Sea Turtle Vopora



A Splash Of Color Vul



Sunrise Nixi

Edited By Beaubuddyz on 7/30/2020 at 3:43 PM.
Theialish
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 9:30 AM Post #5
Username: Animaspectra
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Critques:

For all of them, you need to display the trait variety. Don't put the exact same traits on both male and female.

I also recommend filling in accent colors. Some traits use them, so plain white won't cut it.

MD Aeridini: Midsummer's Dream sounds way better.

It's hard for me to pinpoint flaws without a reference image. Here's an example:



Looking at the image, something like this looks better:



MT Aurleon: Seems too bright.

Reference Image:



Revised Palette:



CB Bulbori: There's many types of citrus. I'm assuming you're looking for a citrus smoothie, judging by the 'blast'.

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Revised Palette:



PP Draeyl: What is the pink for?

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SC Faelora: 7.8/10 too much cook.

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Revised Palette:



PCC Ferrikki: Pen Pineapple Apple Pen!

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Revised Palette:



PO Griffi: Is this a sakura blossom? Haha, JK!

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Revised Palette:



BL Lighira: Summer Sun?

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Revised Palette:



BR Luffox: I'm blown away!

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RF Lunemara: Amazon?

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SH Lupora: What do you mean by "summer haze"?

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F Morkko: Looks like a green screen.

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SS Nephini: oh ho ho ho, what do I see?

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HC Ny'vene: Purple?

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CF Nytekrie: Is that an Owl City reference?

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FSL Puffadore: Can I have some?

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SS Qitari: OoO Colorful!

I did a sundae qit too!

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MS Ryori: S P A C E

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Edited By Animaspectra on 7/30/2020 at 6:34 PM.
Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 1:08 PM Post #6
I don't really use referance images, but I can find a few if it helps. :)

(For the Draeyl, I got the pink from the color of fruit punch I'm used to, I red/pink color.)

Thank you!!!
Theialish
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Posted: 7/28/2020 at 1:37 PM Post #7
I gave you ref images.

The pair shown is my version. Don't steal it, that's bad.

It's my idea of what a good palette would look like.
Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/30/2020 at 3:37 PM Post #8
Okay, I was just saying I could find something similar to my design if you wanted though.

I never said I would steal it...

:)

THanks!

(You never chose a pair for your offspring; do you not want one?)
Beaubuddyz
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Posted: 7/30/2020 at 3:55 PM Post #9
Just saw your new edits; thanks!!

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What? I had no idea they were so light, lol. I pretty much just squished the yellow and brown together. :)

Yick, I just attempted to replicate that and it looks bad. :(

What area did you use for the light brown???

I'm assuming the white is a very light yellow???

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Wait.... is that a real thing???

How did you get that creamy-ish color???

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Lol, I guess. :)



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???

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Is there some brown in there that I'm missing, or is it all dark green???

Theialish
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Posted: 7/30/2020 at 4:38 PM Post #10
which themes are you adressing?

I see ligh, luff, and lune.
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