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Auria
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The Sweet Tooth
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 1:42 PM
Post #11
It is ^-^ I just changed a few things on it.
Thanks for your feedback!!
Lenore
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 2:55 PM
Post #12
Design Name: Heat Storm Aurleon
Rating: 7
Critique: The colors blend nicely, but the design feels more like a cool morning sunrise than a heat storm. If keeping the name as is, I'd recommend shifting the blues to a moodier blue-gray, saturate the oranges and add some red tones.
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Auria
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The Sweet Tooth
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 2:58 PM
Post #13
Cool, thanks for the advice!
Sunflora
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Posted: 7/10/2020 at 10:54 PM
Post #14
Design Name:Toasted Marshmallow Ferrikki
Rating 1-10: 7/10
Your Critique: This is a great start. The base color you used is a perfect color for a marshmallow! The browns, while in a good place, should be lighter and bordering on orange-tan. That will give it a more warm and toasty effect. I'm not quite sure what the deal is with the red and blue as I've never recall seeing those colors related to a toasted marshmallow. I would replace them with ashy greys and creamy yellows instead. Also, ocelot and silver panda are perfect traits for showing how toasted the marshmallow is! Anyways, good work! Keep it up!
Auria
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Posted: 7/11/2020 at 8:34 AM
Post #15
Thank you! I think I might change some of the colors around. I have the blue and red to represent the colors of the fire that you roast them in, so I'll definitely keep those. I may tweak the shades a bit though. ^-^
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