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Fritxyfox
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 4:54 PM Post #11
Keep a good self confadence, know that you are your own artest, and that is awsome! The reason I titled it Soul of two is because half his soul is a dragon soul, and half is human.
Wakame
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 4:58 PM Post #12
I see, and thank you. I'll keep trying, lol.

Do you see anywhere where I could improve? .3.
Fritxyfox
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 5:00 PM Post #13
No, actually . It is really good. And it is not always easy for books to keep me occupied, but this one makes it to the high point really easily.
Wakame
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 5:12 PM Post #14
Ohh, haha. Surely there must be something, but oh well. What's the most interesting thing in chapter 2, do you think?
Fritxyfox
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 5:23 PM Post #15
The main sudden action at the end. That the knife was so close to her, but he didn't hurt her. She was so scared, and he proved to her that she didn't want to die. And he was so quiet on the roof. Wow, I just don't really know what to say, to be honest.
Wakame
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 6:05 PM Post #16
Hahaha, yeah, I liked writing that scene too, even though it didn't turn out quite the same as how I had it in my head. They both have their secrets, as it's slowly being hinted at. Sooner or later, both of their desires will come to the surface, and who exactly they are.

Pieter might be a bit vague on the mysterous factor but he has some stuff in his past worth exploring. Hopefully I can get to it one day, lol. Are you excited? Speculating? XD

Who's your favorite so far, if you have one? .3.

What kinds of dastardly secrets do you think they're hiding, too? XD
Fritxyfox
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Posted: 9/7/2019 at 6:59 PM Post #17
Hm. Pete, retired from war, sort of seems like a kind, but mystrius character. Moore, seems pretty sweet, or... is she? I am not sure though. I just love how it keeps my mind active, I can't often just sit and listen to the teacher(For no better excample) talk about ... let's say nouns. I can't just sit there and listen to just one thing. I have to have my mind just keep going.
Wakame
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Posted: 9/8/2019 at 11:58 AM Post #18
Ooh, yeah, haha. Well I'm glad it does! And I agree, I don't think I could sit down to a boring lecture like that. XD

The third chapter isn't done, unfortunately, but I'm working on it.
Wakame
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Posted: 9/14/2019 at 2:48 AM Post #19
Would you like what I have done for now? I'm not sure when I'll be updating it, lol.
Fritxyfox
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Posted: 9/14/2019 at 10:54 AM Post #20
Sure!!
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