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Superocelot02
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 3:46 PM
Post #1
Could ya'll give me some critique on this? It's a new trait and mutation for the ryori
Cian
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 4:52 PM
Post #2
the idea behind it is good tho with a speacie like the ryori you could realy embrace the 'stitches' style and give it even more of a patchwork or put sewn back togedther kind of look. I feel like this may get drowned under the others mutations/ traits otherwise. ^-^
Superocelot02
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 5:38 PM
Post #3
I was thinking of a trait that looked more parchwork-y kinda like the designs on a quilt with the stitches being the needle stitching, but I didnt know if it would look right.
Cian
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 5:42 PM
Post #4
ryori is the perfect speacie to pull that off nicely, besside it's the automn festival speacie so spooky traits are alwais welcome when they are around. You could even change the orbs for niddles. ^-^
Superocelot02
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 6:03 PM
Post #5
I didnt know we had a autumn festival. I may have to put the design in. The needle orb idea is cool. I may change the orbs themselves into spools of thread and put needles in between the orbs. Kinda like the icicle trait, but I dont know if the thread spool would tie into the design.
Cian
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Posted: 8/18/2019 at 6:28 PM
Post #6
if you are doing a trait set it could conect to somthing else as a wing traits or somthing like that. ^-^
