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Vampireabiss
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Joined: 2/23/2019
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Posted: 4/4/2019 at 11:17 PM
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i have created my own species for this story called Jewegem when i can i will post some illustrations if you would like to be illustrator you can let me now :)
I need help with a title BTW i will post one page of the story perd day hope you enjoy my story
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Vampireabiss
Level 27
Joined: 2/23/2019
Threads: 30
Posts: 525
Posted: 4/4/2019 at 11:20 PM
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CHAPTER1 ~Their here~
"Maday Maday!" cracked the radio "requesting backup!" screamed the two way "im hit!" yelled a man threw the transmitter. All around the room you could see people running around typing on computars and moving things around on the screen. Creaters you had never seen before were destroying the defences of the city
(will finish page at 02 00 tommorrow)
Edited By Vampireabiss on 4/5/2019 at 5:24 AM.
Duucksauuce
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Joined: 3/27/2019
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Posted: 4/5/2019 at 7:59 PM
Post #3
From the little you gave, your story is starting very interestingly. I'm very curious to where it will lead. I think it needs some better grammar but I'm sure it's fine for the time being
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