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Soupboi
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The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/28/2018
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Posts: 959
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 10:23 PM
Post #1
prologue
Hundreds of years the five tribes lived in peace working together to rule aruthien. One man did not like the peace his name was Irvine Hallewell he liked war and chaos.So he stole the orb of Amphitrite which the 5 tribes prized. when the 5 tribes found the orb missing they started to fight over who stole it.
modern aruthien
Deep in the woods of modern aruthien live 5 tribes who can have magic abilites. They are still at war because the 5 tribes accuse each other of stealing the orb of Amphitrite which controls the water. To bring peace the 5 tribes decide to send their kids off to Echuiton the capital of aruthien hoping they would form a alliance and put a end to the war...
tribes
Agrililind-tribe of light
Crirewen-tribe of darkness
Ibukon-tribe of fire
Praori-tribe of earth
Miraobard-tribe of water
[u[ranks
Royal :only4 spots available
Personalized Guard
Hunter
Omega
Elders
Healers
(ping me if interested)
form
Name: first and last
Age: (15-17)
Gender:
power:
rank:
tribe:
Appearance:
Other: (Include likes/dislikes/other stuff about the characters)
Edited By Soupboi on 4/3/2018 at 3:26 PM.
Soupboi
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/28/2018
Threads: 22
Posts: 959
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:06 PM
Post #2
(tell me if i can improve anything because this is my first rp)
Flowerfeather
Level 75
Knight
Joined: 2/19/2018
Threads: 23
Posts: 3,828
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:10 PM
Post #3
I would be more descriptive with the introduction, and I would set ranks.
Soupboi
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/28/2018
Threads: 22
Posts: 959
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:11 PM
Post #4
what type of ranks
Bluepearl13
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 8/21/2016
Threads: 131
Posts: 6,008
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:12 PM
Post #5
You need to work on some capitalization and punctuation. I do agree with Moonlight, it needs to be more descriptive, such as why they are at war. Otherwise, really good! Save me a spot though! I am interested!
Edited By Bluepearl13 on 4/2/2018 at 11:13 PM.
Flowerfeather
Level 75
Knight
Joined: 2/19/2018
Threads: 23
Posts: 3,828
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:22 PM
Post #6
Royal
Personalized Guard
Hunter
Omega
Elders
Healers
Save me a Royal for the fire
Bluepearl13
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 8/21/2016
Threads: 131
Posts: 6,008
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:25 PM
Post #7
Name: Carmela Crimson
Age: 16
Gender: female
power: she can manipulate light (make illusions and such)
rank: specialized guard for Alex, if that is alright
tribe: Ibukon
Appearance:
(Not my art)
Other:
Her parents were traitors to the tribe of Agrililind, She was born in the tribe of Ibukon.
She loves all animals except for spiders, she cant stand spiders. If she could kill off all spiders, she would. She tends to be overly cheerful at times and often cant express negative emotions to others. She is physically weak but very agile. She loves to talk, her goal is to become friends with everyone (realistic goal? Not at all!)
Edited By Bluepearl13 on 4/3/2018 at 8:07 AM.
Soupboi
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/28/2018
Threads: 22
Posts: 959
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:25 PM
Post #8
ok take as much time as you need
Flowerfeather
Level 75
Knight
Joined: 2/19/2018
Threads: 23
Posts: 3,828
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:33 PM
Post #9
Name: Alex Winston
Age: 17
Gender: Male
power: He can create fire
rank: Royal
tribe: Ibukon
Appearance:
Other: N/A
Soupboi
Level 60
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 3/28/2018
Threads: 22
Posts: 959
Posted: 4/2/2018 at 11:34 PM
Post #10
accepted
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