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Forum Index > Other Fiction > Bloodstars broken heart. (Warrior cats o...
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Silentfeather
Level 49
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Posted: 4/16/2017 at 3:54 PM Post #1
Will keep editing! enjoy!
BloodStars broken heart about: my oc meets him and he falls in love a little later of course but something happens to make him turn evil. ENJOY! c:(i do not own warriors it is owned by Erin hunter some parts i made up like suncats and mooncats)
~Chapter one~
The leaves rustled as they fell through the hole in the nursery."Hey EelKit! catch the leaves as they fall!" a light brown-white she-cat prounced up into the air snatching the leaf with one paw.
"C'mon LilyKit! stop showing off!" a black tom with white ear-tips and tail tip jumped and landed on the little she-cat. "Gotcha! Now you cant show off." the black tom sneered. Lilykit wiggled from underneath him and batted at his face.
"Ill show u EelKit!" Lilykit slide underneath him nipping at his hind leg.
"Stop that both of you! the nursery is to crowded for your little fights go outside now! and play something else." a brown tabby she-cat scolded. Eelkit looked around the nursery, she was right the nursery was small and had two other queens, one looked like she had eaten to much prey!
"Yes Volesong." Eelkit mummbled. Volesong was his foster mother,and lilykit his foster sister, thats all he knew no cat would tell him who his real mother was. flicking his tail crossly he stomped out of the nursery, the only cat who didnt treat him like a little scrap of fur was the med-cat Echotail. she was a black cat and her eyes were crystal blue, maybe he should take a visit and see if he could help. he quickly stalked through the shadows of the ditch. the walls of dirt firmly rubbed all up the ditch by starclan the dens were thorns woven together at least the nursery and apprentices den were, the warriors and elders den were what looked like a pile of twigs mashed together, as for the leaders den it was made from a massive pine log that had fallen into the ditch long before waterclan was born, Then there was the medicine cat den which was made of strong vines put together by dried mud. Eelkit pushed through the vines hanging down in the entrence of the med-cat den. "EchoTail? are you here?" Eelkit cautiously peeked into the little cave dug into the mud for a place for echotail to sleep. She wasnt there, must be out collecting herbs Eelkit shrugged, med-cats always think their supplys are low for some reason. "Is that EelKit poking his nose into places it shouldnt be?" a familular voice sounded behind him
"Hi EchoTail! do you need new moss? I found a really good supply near the mud entrance!" Eelkit bounced around her, dont get him wrong his dream was to be warrior but warriors help the med-cats right?
"im afraid not, your five moons old dont you get tired of helping this old medicine cat" she acted like a elder and limped forword while making a face, to bad shes a med-cat he would have loved to have her as a mother.
"A real warrior helps all his or her clanmates!" Eelkit mewed. slightly dissapointed
"Well i heard the hunting patrol coming back behind me why dont you go and get a piece of prey?" EchoTail by now had put the herbs away, EelKit never even noticed the strange herbs she had.
"Okay! anything you want?" Eelkit was hoping to the entrance
"No thank you!" she called as Eelkit wiggled his way through the vines almost crashing into frostpaw, the med-cat apprentice she should get her full med-cat name soon.
"Sorry!" Eelkit squeaked, Frostpaw only looked at him with wide eyes, whats her problem? he wondered while padding to the freshkill pile, before he knew it he had a nice rat in his jaws. Might as well share it with frostpaw as a sorry for crashing into her. suddenly he bit into the rat to hard sending blood showering over him."YUCK! its all over me!" Eelpaw wailed blinking the blood away to see frostpaw staring blankly at him opening her mouth. what was she going to say? mouse brain? but she doesnt look like she was being very humorous.
"Blood!" she screeched her eyes wide with terror.
"Whats going on here?" Mudstar a powerful dark brown tabby tom meowed calmly as he approached them, by now more cats had gathered around to see. Frostpaw started frantically mewing to him so fast Eelkit didnt know what she was saying. Mudstars eyes seemed to soften with sadness"Are you sure this is what we have to do couldnt he live without this scar?" What? what scar live with what all he did was bite to hard into a juicy rat!
"Yes." Frostpaw breathed. where was echotail? shes the real med-cat!
"Cats of waterclan! listen, one of our med-cats have revealed something to me but we must not panic in order to solve this..." He paused as if to hold back something back in his voice that had started to come out, sorrow? Eelkit thought "In order to solve this" he continued "Frostpaw has told me to rename this kit." No! dont rename me! Eelkit held back a whimper.
Edited By Silentfeather on 4/18/2017 at 12:53 PM.
Silentfeather
Level 49
Joined: 1/3/2017
Threads: 22
Posts: 264
Posted: 4/16/2017 at 3:56 PM Post #2
"From now until apprentice and warrior name this kit shall be known as Bloodkit"
~Chapter 2~
"WHAT! No! im EelKit!please no shes not even a full med-cat! wheres EchoTail?! please..." BloodKits wails died down into a whimper. anger pulsed through him everyones eyes were wide with shock. "First you dont tell me who my own parents are now you change my name into something horrid!" Bloodkit growled unsleathing his claws he darted for the entrance. he curved around all those who were trying to catch him, the entrance now blocked bloodkit went for the next best thing, the wall, curling his claws into the mud he climbed the seeming never ending wall. At the top he bolted left and right not caring if he got lost, blocking out the yowls of his... "clanmates" and crys of dispair from volewing and Echotail. Soon he wouldnt need to block them out he would be well away from them. he'll go to the moonrock starclan is who he could turn to. As the yowls and crys died away he saw a open area with four massive oaks and a stump of where one used to be, a river flowed at the bottom of the slope he was standing on. Not slowing his pace he went down the tiny slope.
I'll follow the river. he decided. Following the river into the trees he stopped at the sound of voices. it was dark so he would hide well. Stalking through the stratchy bushes he came to see two cats each on one side of the river, but instead of two there were four two in which were kits. Perking his ears he strained to listen.
".. silverkit and wolfkit." the pretty white-silver tabby she-cat was saying "They will go with you to lightingclan" she picked them up and swam across the river to the red-brown tom.
"Thank you quietstar" he dipped his head with love and respect.
"Now I didnt want you left with no family burntstar." The white-silver she-cat pressed her nose agance his head. "You should go now I have no doubt they'll be safe with you."
"Farewell quietstar I'll see you at the next gathering." He picked up the two squealing kits and disappeared into the bush behind him. Bloodkit froze. the she-cat whispered something then swam back across the river. What just happened they were in different clans! Were they mates? thats aganced the warrior code! who knew two leaders breaking the warrior code. Bloodkit's heart sank what if hes a kit whos half-clan? what if hes just a kittypet? or a passing rouge?
there was no way of going back tonight he would get punished for sure. Digging himself a little den under the bush he closed his eyes and fell into a sleep hoping no cat or fox would find him.
He woke blinking at how bright the sun was the bush he was sleeping under had been puleed away! by what though? looking around he saw the river had risen and it was at his paws. fighting to get up and away from the water he bumped into a cat behind him. Scared to turn around he blurted out "Im sorry! I want to go home I dont care about my name! there was only a purr of amusement.
"What clan are you from I'll bring you home" he turned around to see a big brown tabby tom only the markings look strange like flashes of lightning, He was smiling? Weird.
"Uhm, waterclan.." Bloodkit shifted from paw to paw looking at the sand
"Your a long way away from home and i wont ask why only your name what is it?" the toms voice wasnt upset it was gentle.
"Well uh tell me yours first and lets get going as fast as we can!" bloodkit wanted to get out of here away from the river
"Hold up I have to tell my leader first and im boltfur" Boltfur turned around with a flick of his tail "Come on"
"okay." Bloodkit mumbled. Bloodkit followed reluctantly through the strange forest.
"Now, tell me what is your name? Theres no need to be ashamed of a name." boltfur slowed his pace for Bloodkit to keep up. he was right it says nothing about him like Boltfur sounds like he was going to be mean but he was nice.
"Bloodkit." he admitted. Boltfur was silent for a minute but then spoke again.
"You know that name says nothing about you as a cat maybe to strike fear into your enemies Dont be ashamed little one I think whoever gave you that name just thought you were going to be a terrible cat when your not you choose who you want to be not them." for the rest of the walk bloodkit thought over and over those words each time they were right. suddenly he saw green bushes with weird brown spikey looking things. as he walked through the bushes they tugged and caught on his fur cats starting poking their heads out of weird shaped dens.
the two kits he saw yesterday cautiously walked out of a dome-shaped den when they saw him the one with leopard like spots and white fur ran up to him and sniffed him.
"You smell funny!" she squeaked and ran behind her sister a silver tabby.. Her sister only rolled her eyes and continued to walk up to him.
"You know shes right" Her green eyes gleamed with amusement."Who are you?" her gaze grew serious"what are you doing here?" she pressed when Bloodkit was silent.
"Well, i just want to go home thats why im here boltfur is going to bring me home." Bloodkit watched her eyes as they grew wide.
"I want to go home!" she yowled
"This is your home silverkit!" a blue-gray she-cat with black spots along her back snapped
"Hey silverkit we got a new moss ball to play with!" a strangely stripped blue-silver tom called over from a small group of two other kits who were laughing at him. why laugh at him? he did nothing wrong, he looks a little small though. Silverkit looked at the kits laughing at him bared her teeth into a snarl and stalked them. they were to busy laughing at the small tom to notice her finally she leaped digging her teeth into the dark gray tabby tom who yelped with shock.
"Get off of him!" the tan she-cat with light spots all over her screeched. by now a familiar pelt flashed passed him instantly he recognized BurntStar.
"No daughter of mine is going to act like that! Silverkit a word now." Burntstar's voice was stern. Silverkit got off of the dark gray tom who was slightly bleeding and laying on one side panting the tan she-cat was standing over him mewing quickly Bloodkit heard some of it.
"...Those half-clan kits we're trouble the first time they showed their faces..." Bloodkit didnt want to hear anymore the poor kits had a better reason to run away he only ran away because of his name.
"Do they know your here?" a voice startled him he didnt notice burntstar was standing infront of him
"No. i ran away" bloodkit looked at his paws.
"very well boltfur mousetail and sweetWing go with him to his clans if they ask any questions tell them were you found him and that you weren't going to send him home alone." Burntstar ordered. They obeyed and walked in silence the whole way. Bloodkit didnt mind he was thinking about who his parents might be, could he ask when he got back? would they tell him? Maybe he could threaten to run off again. oh no! He forgot about the moonrock! stifling a sigh he picked up a leaf and bit down on it waiting for something to shower over him again make this all a dream, he would be Eelkit again and everything would be normal but all there was was a loud Crunch, his escort snapped their heads around to look at him they twitched their whiskers in amusement and continued walking again.
Finally the open area came into view and great starclan was half the clan looking for him?! they were sniffing where he started at the river he reconized... Volewing,Echotail, SheepSong the deputy,SwiftFlower,PetalWing, and one other he had seen but never knew the name of. As they approached Echotail shot her head up and ran up to him. "Bloodkit!" she wrapped her tail around him as the others crowded around him. only Sheepsong payed attention to the lightningclan cats.
"Thank you for bringing him back i wont ask where you found him i dont want to know" she dismissed his escort with a flick of her tail.
"Thank you!" he called.
"Back up all of you before we go back to camp i need a word with him!" the cats exchanged worried glances then headed back to camp.
"I'm glad your back safe,Now once I say this you wont run away again?" her voice was filled with relief and worry.
"I promise from starclan and back." Bloodkit's paws pricked with curiosity.
She sighed then mewed "I know who your parents are"
"Who?! please tell me im not half clan!" he couldnt keep the worry out of his voice
she purred "No, because Bloodkit I am your mother and mudstars your father"
~Chapter 3~
Bloodkit stood in silence. He wanted this! now it all made sense the treating him different the sad look in mudstars eyes when he renamed him! Joy and anger bubbled in him, why hadnt they told him sooner? why now? Echotail was staring at him, He ran and dug his face into her fur, she was his real mother! What now? does the rest of the clan know? he didnt dare ask if they did they wouldnt still go to echotail for help. explains why they only listen to frostpaw most of the time. Bloodkit looked up at the sky it was already sundown, how long has he stood here?
"We should get back." bloodkit sighed.
"Yeah we dont want another search party" Echotail joked.
They walked home mostly in silence. Bloodkit suddenly realized tomorrow he was going to be a apprentice! and tonight was the half moon. Bloodkit wanted to beg his mother to let him go with her to the moonRock but it was only for med-cats to go tonight. It suddenly felt weird to call her his mother, All his life the answer was in front of him. He hoped starclan would give him a nice dream tonight, Because all of the clan would be swarming around him like bees. As they came down the mud- entrance but he came into what he didnt expect. A motonless body lay in the middle of camp. He screeched as he found out who it was,
"VoleSong!" He ran to were his foster sister was nosing helplessly at her mother telling her to wake up. "What happened?" He franticly examined the teeth marks, Fox a growl rumbled in his throat. The clan only murmured a greeting to him he didnt care only when he tried to settle next to his foster mother did frostpaw nose him away. he bared his teeth and ran to VoleWings side, Frostpaw dragged him away this time and shook her head. she poitned to the nursery. But it wouldnt be the same. Bloodkit frowned he was going to head to the nursery when the leader got ontop of the high log.
"May all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather around the high log for a clan meeting!" he yowled even though most were already there. "Today we have horrible news" he started awkwadly, Bloodkit realized that mudstar is a new leader and never announced a death other then the leaders. The old leader died when Bloodkit was one moon old. "VoleWing has passed, we honor her bravery and courage reports say she was distracting the fox for the others to get away." some cats murmured her name respectfully but anger soared though bloodkit she never got to see her kit become a apprentice! which will be soon! like, two days maybe. after a momment of silence the leader spoke again, "As she makes the trip to starclan i would like to make her kits apprentices." some cats started to protest but then thought about it more, they reluctantly agreed. "Lilykit, please come into the clearing." looking up from her mother she dragged herself away from the motionless body and warily looked up at the leader. " Lilykit do you promise to learn the warrior code and defend it?" A hint of sorrow edged mudstar's voice.
"i do." Lilykit sighed.
"Then from this momment until your warrior name you shall be known as Lilypaw and SandStripe will mentor you. I trust sandstripe to pass on all he knows to you." Bloodkit watched as the tan-striped warrior touch noses with Lilypaw. "Blood kit." Blood kit almost jumped when he heard his name. "Do you promise to learn the warrior code and defend it with your life?" Blood kit hesitated, Would the other cats approve?
"I do..." Blood kit trembled who would mentor him..?
"Then from now until your warrior name you shall be known as Blood paw and SheepWing will mentor you, Sheep wing i trust you will pass on all you know to-" He was cut off by meows of protest,
" He doesnt deserve to be apprentice!"
"Yeah he ran off and look what happened!!"
" He shouldnt have even been born!!"
"ENOUGH!" Mudstar yowled. "Do you question my decisions? Blood paw already lost VoleWing she wouldve wanted this for him!"
"Mudstars right, Blood paw may not be kin but he is kin to me if hes not a apprentice neither am I." Lilypaws strong voice took every cat by surprise determination and care glittered in her eyes, she might be a good leader one day Blood paw thought gradually the protests died down into whispering as the cats began to break up sheep wing had padded up to bloodpaw and Lilypaw, before sheepwing said a word bloodpaw flashed him a glance he wanted to talk to lilypaw alone. Sheepwing backed off with a nod.
"You didnt have to do that i wouldve been fine if i didnt become a apprentice" Bloodpaw half lied.
"I've had enough of the constant whispers about you and the cruel name. you will always be Eelpaw to me." Blood kit flinched at how soft her tone was they always knew they weren't kin and she always picked on him what changed?
"I-I better go find Sheepwing" Blood paw stammered and he ran off to Sheepwing who was talking to Sandstripe.
"You ready now? we're showing you two the territory today wheres Lilypaw?" Bloodpaw paniced he didnt want to be near her soft amber gaze.
"Can we go hunting instead?" Bloodpaw blurted out. Sheep wing glanced at sandstripe who shrugged.
"I guess later we'll meet up with lilypaw." Sheep wing decided with a flick of her tail she started to walk to the mud-entrance. Blood paw scrambled after her avoiding Lilypaw.
"Where are we going first?" Bloodpaw questioned.
"Seeing the territory." Sheep wing responded firmly
"But you said hunting!" Bloodpaw growled
"Too bad" she turned and headed for the clearing that bloodpaw went through to end up in lightningclan territory. "This is four oaks where all the clans meet on the full moon as a night of peace" Sheep wing explained. Blood paw remembered lightningclans camp and the poor half-clan kits. He stifled a sigh when they turned away from the four oaks. They came to a burned down twoleg den which was in between other twoleg dens that wernt burned down. "Never come here unless on patrol not all kittypets are soft" Sheep wing spat. her attitude changed quickly
"Have you ever fought one?" Bloodpaw asked.
"Of course! i sent that kittypet crying to its twolegs." Sheep wing joked. for a while they walked in silence. until a foul yet familiar stench filled the air. "This is the Stormclan border" Sheep wing wrinkled her nose. "Swimming cats! can you believe it?" they veered away from the border until another smell filled the air.
"This is the fireclan border." Bloodpaw couldnt believe it! there were so few trees and the grass was yellow the wind moving it like it were flames. How could any cat live in such a place? They turned around and headed deeper into the territory till they came to a large pool.
"what is this place?" Blood paw gazed at the water it was silent and still.
"The pool of silent whispers no cat has ever seen it move but if some cat did it is said they will see their fate in the pools reflection" Sheep wing stared at it until turning around. "Lets just go back right now theres more to see but we can see it another time."
"Uh.. okay" Blood paw shrugged.
As they went back bloodpaws mind wondered, if he saw it move what would he see? his mother? his name changed back?... death? Blood paw felt frozen surely not death? He shook away the thought as they went down the slope.
"Eat then rest" Sheep wing ordered. Blood paw was grateful to settle down and eat but his head was spinning he has to go back to that pool!
Edited By Silentfeather on 6/10/2017 at 11:00 AM.
Silentfeather
Level 49
Joined: 1/3/2017
Threads: 22
Posts: 264
Posted: 9/22/2017 at 5:52 AM Post #3
~Chapter 3~

Bloodpaw woke up, The moon was shining high above.
 
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