once ther ho am i geting ahead of my slefe agen i do that a lot ok carters
meca's ghost a lupra as darke as night tho you may no see it at frist but she is evil

rano a good ledre of a grop of sylesti refugie and outcasts form the kingdom now rulled by meca

rily a member that was rescued from the dungen but later in the story

rainbow a small qite how was stolen from her mom in the dungen as a egg the evil meca planed to rise her to fight for her but she was rescud as an egg she has a deep concehn to the legend and magic and never knew her trow name

nero same story as the other cub

ho more carecters
rena she is taking care of both the baby sylesties

dragon wisp the mate of rena and a gerd

baned a gerd and the mate of rano

capter 1 a morning berkfest
rena ran thow the forset with 3 eggs careying two in her stempuke bags and the last in her try talls as she ran she was unawer that a egg sleped out her tall



she got to her nest in the cave finly she said and put the 2 eggs in the nest and saw that she lost the last egg she called to her mate dragon wisp she called can you weach the two eggs i save wall i get the last 1 says rena sure thing says dregon wisp now late me tell you a story abut a yong roriy named rae just then rena walks in the cave with the egg i got him or her says rena well its morning says so berckfest time ua

ok rulls for whan you resond its ok to ues a litil what ever its called like this
whan i thak like this lol i love this its ok
bt whan i take lk dis its herd to under stand

chapter 3
there the little eggs haeched 1 by 1 aw i'll name you rainbow nero and shela cutie pies

If you use punctuations like periods and commas, people will probably enjoy your stories more.

i know but even then names are not as crative as the rest and they will think there not that good so they will pass them up hay have you herd these 2 i made the legend of uizaramoll an tanaca a feirnd to the end
i don't want them geting locked befor ther over and we start on the next 1
the legend of uizaramoll
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=37058
tanaca a friend till the end
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=35302

chepter 2 the legend
rainbow opens her eyes after a long rewst she is quit bored i know poeple drop books aruond her all the time i think i'll reed 1 wow its a legend too bad theres no picturs hay it says her that is a kind of legend called a pro pro proficy when the moon is full the night watchers will howl the moroko will growl and the vopras will come out of the sea to take reveng on none other the she is lupra as dark as night as mean as a moroko just then a nyvene flys up saying your comeing with me liza you must have me mixed up with som other qitrie i mean i'm rainbow my name is not liza yas you are did they not tell you how you truley are liza a qitrie said to come with her freinds pyro the puffadoor and arabell the roriy to defeet my master meca reed on it says that in the book liza or are you so yuong you did not reed it but i'm not liza theres nothing specle abut me now get out of my way boom what did i just do that yas you truley did liza said a quitrie how sudnily came out of noware yas my loved dhagtur

ho collar key
red=mystrie qitrie liza or rainbows mother qiter
pink=rainbow or liza well both
dark blue=evil not meca
green=rano
black=meca
light blue=rena
nero=yellow
purple=rily
chapter 4
liza that guy is crazy maybe we can find out more about who this liza character is if we do maybe we can save her from the book liyla a quite so brave but thuse only her great granddaughter servives today along with her great great granddaughter liza destined to preform the deed agein

No thank you Jade. Could I ask to not be pinged in the future? :)

I was trying to read this, but it's a bit hard. I think I might like this a lot more if it was easier to read. Perhaps you could go back and proofread a little bit? I love reading other people's work, but I tend to loose track of what's happening if it has no punctuation and a lot of misspelled words.